Story Problems, Why I am a Paradoxical Style writer, Relapsing updates, and more! · 11:36pm Dec 10th, 2014
SO LET'S GET THE FIRST THING DONE.
LISTING THE TOPICS IN CHRONOLOGICAL ORDER, SO I WON'T RAMBLE ON DIFFERENT SUBJECTS!
PART ONE:
1. Story Problems
2.Why I am a Paradoxical Writer
3.|House M.D|Relapsing Updates
PART TWO
4. Rewrites and Reboots
5. Technicality Problems
6.Activity
7. Conclusion.
So, as the first thing on the list I should address is problems with my newly released story and my first one. I have deleted them, and I will get on the subject of revising them shortly.
As with any writer would agree, there's not always going to be success. It's a gamble of reputation on any sort of free site, than money. I know that, yet, I still think that everyone would have the same sort of complex thinking as me; but that is entirely false.
To any outside glance, it would seem like my story plot doesn't make sense or my chapters are confusing and they would instantly downvote without any sort of hesitation. Which I understand completely, and I am at fault for so. That topic will be touched shortly.
As I came to learn, I have not followed my Manuscript for my newly released story. I personally am ashamed I gave you guys an undercooked story that is way too complicated and had no sort of hidden context or hints, such as my most popular story, Relasping.
Now, I have the file for Darkly Dream's story, but the manuscript was destroyed due to hard drive crash and a really hard hitting reboot. So that means I have to take down the story and redo everything to it, from plot to simple dialogue.
Hotline Payday's Manuscript was not followed, which broke my own personal rules, and as a result gave you guys a really confusing Prolouge that had no place for any sort of grasping because everything was too fast and it threw off what I meant the story to originally be.
Relapsing will have to be rewritten as well, so I will be Revoking the Submission to make the chapters bigger and more understanding what's going on,yet, not spoonfeeding the entire Moral or Theme.
For the reason of confusion is problems with it's own soft spot, but if added in the correct places it's wonderful. Such plots that make you guess why something is happening instead of blatantly telling you is really appealing to me.
Works such as the Tale Tell Heart, Five Nights at Freddy's, Breaking Bad, and House M.D are examples of really executed confusion, mainly the genius behind the lore of House M.D (Going to call it H.MD). When you first put on the show, it just seems to thrown you in with no context or clues to what the hell is going on. It's explained later, but the history of the characters are shrouded in a white misty state instead of a black one.
White meaning it's there, but you can't get it yet.
Black meaning it's not there, or just rushed and spewd in your face.
Since I like that, it's how I practiced. Now that I am bringing in my own Paradoxical state of complex in be between the lines sort of deal, no one understands. Probably one who thinks critically and reads every context clue would be more understanding about the story than a bag of rock salt.
So, it's my duty to make sure this folly doesn't happen. So I am reworking stories.
Relapsing goes parallel with the ending of the show. If you read EVERY DETAIL I given, you would be able to stitch together a explanation for everything that happened...
But, I am not satisfied with the Number of people understanding what I am going for with the story. That means a total makeover, so it isn't a piece of shite.
I am grateful for the Twenty-likes, way more than I was expecting, but I don't have the same audience that I could potentially have. I see that I might be underrated, but with the slop that just came out proved that I can fuck up.
So...
Longer chapters.
More complex story line, like the show.
Better Character Design for my NPCs and Side Characters.
More sarcastic metaphors.
Paradoxical Illnesses.
Story arcs, that question the Sanity of EVERYONE.
A deep burden hidden in House, and a bigger surprise that will shock the entire town!
And more context clues to find out WHY he is helping Ponyville, and HOW he is in Ponyville in the first place.
