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  • 326 weeks
    Revamp 3: Revenge of the Vamp

    Okay, Last of the TSW series revamped. I changed the focus of Golden Bit's plot, so it hopefully makes a little more sense, but try not to expect miracles, here. Anything more intensive would have required practically rewriting the whole story, and I'm definitely not doing that. I was going to do more with the final chapter, but honestly, I just want to move on to newer stories. I'd rather

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  • 346 weeks
    Slight Revamp 2: The Revampening part 2

    Okay. So. I have come up with an alternate subplot for Golden Bit that I think will work. However, this is going to require a much more intensive rewriting of the story, especially the later chappies. The first few chappies are going to be just like the previous two arcs, with mainly just corrections, and updating the Equish to my new standard. Later on... well, it's gonna get different.

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  • 347 weeks
    Slight Revamp 2: The Revampening

    Okay, so I Would Do Anything for Love, the second story in the TSW series has been... adjusted. Mistakes corrected, Equish words updated, and Celestia's badassery scene lengthened. This is one of the original criticisms of this story that bugged me upon reflection. I gave her this grand build up, only for her to falter because the clock ran out. So now, she pushes on a little and... No. You want

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  • 347 weeks
    Slight revamp

    So, I was wondering whether to add another chapter to Amore Obbligato, or to a non-pony story I'm working on, when I decided, "You know what? This is as good a time as any to finally clean up TSW!" So, here we are, with me going through the story, correcting old mistakes that were missed, adding some clarifications, and generally making all the details and words used compliant with later sequels.

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  • 370 weeks
    Question for any Italian speakers out there

    So, in writing up my newest chapter of Amore Obbligato, I've run into a small problem with which I was hoping my readers can help. As you know, the story revolving around Octavia and Twilight, there's going to be a lot of musical terms, most of which are Italian in origin. That being said, I thought it would be cute if Octavia and her mother have cute little musical nicknames for each other. To

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Jun
25th
2012

New cover art! · 10:25pm Jun 25th, 2012

Cover art has been added to the story. This is temporary, and a more finished version will replace it later. A few things to note about this: I don't like how Spitfire's mane turned out and may change it as well. Also I am ashamed to admit that I totally cribbed Trixie's pose from another picture. I hope you can forgive me, since this is only like the third or fourth time I've drawn ponies.

In other news, chapter six is underway.

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Man, I suck at blogs...

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Comments ( 7 )

Hmmm, I agree about Spitfire's mane but it's pretty nice! :pinkiehappy:

I don't care, I still enjoy your story, and cover art can only add to it:twilightsmile:

And it's awesome too :3

196192 darn it, second comment by 15 seconds :twilightangry2:

That's a pretty good picture, I think Spitfire's hair looks just fine, nice and mussy :twilightblush: although I have to say I've always had her cutie mark as the burning bolt in my headcannon; lightning bolts being sort of a standard motif around pegasi whose special talent lay in flight (hence the "Wonderbolts").

Good to hear that a new chapter is in the works and I shall greedily devour it once you finish :pinkiehappy:

EDIT: As a little addition, you may find this really cool. the second chapter of the new "Bechdel's Law Enforced" story has some of the best descriptions of Wonderbolt Aerobatics I've ever read.

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Thanks. Glad you like it. And it does look a little... poofy, doesn't it?
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I've always imagined it to be some sort of cometary motif, what with her name and all, but that's just me. I always thought the lightning bolts were because they had so much to do with weather. And thanks for that tip on the story. I'll look into that when I can for the upcoming chapter focusing on her. :twilightsmile:

196503 just a bit. But that's pretty close to how Spitfire's hair looks in the show, so no issues :twilightsmile:

Oh and ur story made me happy :scootangel:

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Poofy maned Spitfire is good, her mane should look sort of unruly.
Spitfire's name is a reference to the British WWII fighter plane of the same name, and in fanfics tends to also describe her personality; that being "a person, especially a girl or woman, who is of fiery temper and easily provoked to outbursts."

I think the reason that the headcannon of bolt cutie marks being related to flight skill is prevalent is because the only pegasi we've seen with bolt cutie marks are Rainbow Dash and her spiritual predecessor, Firefly; as well as it being emblazoned on the Wonderbolts flight suits. The Wonderbolts themselves certainly aren't associated with weather management since they're mainly a flight group doing air shows and apparently working in a limited peacekeeping capacity (hinted at by "Secret of my Excess")

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