Apparently my novel has a really dark submeaning

Relevant wikipedia for lazy

I swear it's meant to be a fluff story about transdimensional unicorns. But then I was shown this and she hits all symptoms.

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[zel]

transdimensional

>not transgender
damn, i got my hopes up for nothing

[Divine Path]

2614068
Your motives are likely less than pure, but this.

[Divine Path]

That does sound relevant, however.

[Toraka]

2614068

2614073 I was about to tell him off but then fimfiction ate my comment.
What will happen when the meaning-twisting wolves find this? Will it be torn apart despite its intention, like classical German literature?

[Toraka]

2614073 Also, any time you ask, you can get one about the topic.

[Divine Path]

2614084
Why thank you for the offer then. I wasn't voicing any particular ire though, not to worry.
Semantics are a veritable maze of twists and turns...

[Toraka]

2614089 It is oddly underpresented, isn't it.

They give up so easily when a topic is hard to treat.

[Divine Path]

2614108
Who do you speak of? The readers?

[Toraka]

2614112 The authors who would treat transgenderism.
There is so much you could shoehorn with the use of magic... as certain people have done already, though more for eroticism than philosophy.

[Divine Path]

2614115
Indeed. To find a believable reason for conflict regarding this is something to strive for.

[Toraka]

2614156 I believe it holds plenty of conflict in itself, it is simply too complex that they would want to handle it.

Case in point, the apparently borderline Midnight. There's no actual conflict in her story, is there.

[zel]

2614115 eroticism is philosophy.

[Divine Path]

2614163
I suppose this means I must fit my continued reading into my developing schedule. Still, the conflict is internal. After all, no story can exist without some sort of conflict. Because there is, it moves on.
It is a sad things adventures end when authors are unable to handle the complexity.

[Toraka]

2614196 Think with your brain.
2614204 That is my point. The mere existence of the issue creates enough conflict to carry the entire story, without any need for forced comic villains. As I am sure you are aware yourself.

I must admit that I can't spontaneously make a good concept of a story which would treat such an issue, but to give up completely is weakness.

[Divine Path]

2614223
The variation is nice, at least. Well, we all have our strengths as well.