Coming soon: Secret OC origins compilation. · 3:16am Nov 21st, 2014
So, I've, over the years, had tons and tons of little oc ideas(Ranging from my first, a child drow turned pony who gets adopted by cheerilee, Luna's son who deals with silly things, a stallion who gets emotionally abused, a very weird changeling story that involves practically body swapping with Caramel, a special OC story about a friend's OC, etc) and I've always wanted to write stories about them, but never really found the time. So I decided I'll add a new little story, a special OC compilation that I'll be posting all kinds of small one shots, each one clearly marked and focusing on a different OC. After the little one shot I'll post a little information thing about said OC(more story ideas, original maker if I'm writing the story for someone else, where the idea came from, romance involvements, etc. Those that people like, feel free to comment on and if people like them enough, well, I'll probably write more stories with them. None of the stories will likely be very long, I'm imagining in the 5k-20k range, likely a max of 5 short chapters.
Here's the list of info I'll need to use your OC in a story. Keep in mind, filling this out does not guarantee your character will be in a story, it just offers the opportunity. This is a side fun thing, not something I'm guaranteeing as I do still have other commitments. I cannot guarantee your character will be exactly how you imagined it, I'll try my best but as a separate writer, I can only guarantee so much. Moving along though, fill out the below info and send it into a message on fimfiction. Keep in mind this information will be posted after each OC's story, in a little info chapter to help people better understand the OC.
Creator: You, the maker of the OC.
OC's name: Pretty self explanatory.
Race: Again, obvious.
Appearance: Colorations, clothing, things like that.
Personality: Good and bad.
Cutie mark:Do they have one? What talent does it pertain to?
Job: If they have one.
Family/friends: Are they related to anypony? Especially important if this is a group story with multiple OCs.
Romance: Any romantic interests? How did they find this relationship, who initiated, etc etc.
Story: What kind of story did you want for them? Keep in mind these are short stories, so no epic quests. Maybe how they met somepony, initiation into some group, maybe even a first date. Things like that. Make sure to fill this one out.
Future: Welp, after the story where will they go? This is your OC, I'm sure you had all kinds of interesting ideas for where they would go from here on out. If people like them enough, maybe you'll get people begging you to tell more of these stories and how their lives continue.
How did you make this OC: Ohhh, the big one. How did you come up for this OC? Was it from a tabletop game, maybe it just popped into your head, maybe you were doodling one day and the pony you made you chose to be yours, I imagine this will be the big one. It's your pony, tell us all about it and how you made it. Not only that, why it's special to you.
Any special questions you'd like to answer about your OC. I'm not perfect, so I'm sure there are plenty of questions I should have asked, but didn't think to. If they're good, I'll add them to this sheet.
One final note. If I don't choose your OC, it does not mean your OC is bad or even that I don't like your OC. It likely just means I didn't feel like writing that type of character or that story at the time. It's all a personal preference and I am in no way an expert of determining the value of individual OCs.
Ahem, is anyone allowed to post somethin' here?
2613712 Yup. Though, OC submissions and stuff I'd prefer if they were private messaged to me, since they'll be pretty big and I don't want the comments crowded with 20 lines per person.
2614040 One last, probably. Only pony OC's?
2614812 Well, mlp ocs. Griffons, changelings, etc are all okay.
2615520
I know that but, no outer world creatures right?
2615569 Outer world creatures?
2616262 Humans and such?
2616734 Ohhhh. Eh, maybe? I'm likely not going to write a human in equestria story though. I'm not a real fan of them.
2617175 ahh, not likely but possible? Sorry for messing up this post though.
2617245 Is fine.
2617718 Oookay
2614040 Creator: me
Name: Crescent-Blade nocturnis
Race: vesper ( bat pony hybrid specifically unicorn )
apperance : i.imgur.com/VPEyq8F.jpg ( covered eye is gold)
personality: ( beginning ) quite angry kind and a bit nerdy ( becomes ) sarcastic snark a little mean flirtatious battle hungry but noble and protective
Cutie mark: golden crescent moon overlayed two crossed red swords representing affinity for combat especially sword combat
family: has mom and dad ((bios here its the fourth bio page)
romance : has a marefriend ruby wing (bio here
story: basically the story takes place in the school for gifted unicorns and crescent is bullied often for being a blank flank his bat like apperance and for his love of comics and he's afraid to fight back saying he can take it and he has no friends because most of the other students avoid him because of his in their words " evil apperance " but he feels like he's losing his mind only keeping it with the help of his parents then one day he see's that the group of bullies who picked on him beating on a bat filly seeing this he fights them off in the fight he goes into a berserker like state beating them all into a bloody pulp he had to be restrained by a royal guard to calm down after which he noticed he had gotten his cutie mark andd was kicked out the school at home while being comforted by his parents a high ranking night guard comes and gives him a chance to join a private education and military training program the junior night guard he accecpts saying he wants to learn how to use his talent to protect others who cant defend themselves to become a protector
future: from his training and experiences from the junior guard's hed become a honed skilled warrior capable of making construct swords. He also became much more aggressive and confident and sarcastic always hungry for a battle and challenges he met his marefriend saving her from death row with the help of princess luna. She and him formed a strong friendship that turned into romance in their adventures in unlikely but possible
why i created him: i created crescent as originally my ponysona but i made changes to him to formed him into his own character the original concept of him was a noble protector who had violent and rude personality due to years of bulling and prejudice of course many changes were made originally crescent was an orphaned kirin now he has supportive parents and is tribal hybrid. I know you are going to ask this the reason he has a red and black color scheme is because for two reasons one i really liked because of nostalgia for the epyon gundam and because of how people view red and black characters they immediately assume they are one note evil characters and usually avoid them without usually giving them a chance so i sorta play that off in the story. And i wanted to make s big part of his character is that he's inspired to stand up and fight for what he believes in by comic book heros because i was inspired to write by the characters so yeah i wanted to make a oc who is a rude mean but is willing to fight what he know is right to make sure no one experiences the pain he did when he was young because that's what he learned from his parents and the fictional heros of his childhood and I think i did pretty good
2620741 I have this from your message already. Please put everything in a spoiler tag so it doesn't take up so much room.
2620901 yeah sorry fimfics been on the frits for me everything just got crazy because i couldn't find the pm in sent but i could find it know after now
2620903 Dang. I was hoping spoiler compacted it. Eh, no worries. I have it in messages, so I'll let you know if I decide to use it eventually. Though, the next story has already been chosen.
2620936 ok do want me to delete it?
2620944 Eh, if you want. Not sure there's any need to go that far.
2621561 well ok then
That is an interesting idea for fanfic. I'll send you a message soon if the submissions are still open
OC name: Shadow Strike
Race: Changeling disguised as a unicorn
Appearence: Silver coat with ash colored mane and tail. emerald eyes. In the winter he wears a red scarf, but other than that, his only clothing is his sword's scabbard
Personality: Prideful and easily angered. Good humored and serious when he needs to be. can be paranoid due to him being a disguised changeling.
Cutie mark: A red polygonal zero with a slash through it. It represents him being stealthy and agile
Job: Bounty hunter/mercenary. Changeling military deserter since ten years before the canterlot invasion
Family and friends: Shadow has an adopted changeling daughter named Pupa. His current romance is an Earth pony bounty hunter named Long Shot. Known for being good friends with Donut Joe, Bon Bon, and ex-coltfriend with Lyra Heartstrings, all of whom knows he's a changeling
Romance: as said before, he is in a relation ship with Long Shot the sniper, and is Lyra heartstrings ex. Lyra and Long Shot don't have any romantic rivalry, Lyra even says often "You two are the OTP in the fan fiction I call my life"
Story: I kinda just wanted a slice of life. Shadow, Pupa, and Long Shot would move in with Lyra and Bon Bon for a few weeks after the canterlot invasion to keep a low profile.
Future: This story i really just want to build on Shadow's family life and show that he's not a complete badass bounty hunter all of the time
I came up with Shadow Strike as a parody of Zer0 from borderlands 2, just with a more likeable personality
Not so Sure if mine will get written but I can try
Creator: Helios_Slasher77
OC name: Crimson September
Race: Earth Pony
Appearance: white coat, red eyes, red/grey mane, will often wear a black vest. and has a black old English S for a cutie mark. Its supposed to show how well he is when it comes to speaking. But since Old English is a hard font to read sometimes. It's hard for some ponies to understand what he is saying.( The S also stands for salty...jk)
Personality: Good but sometimes very shy. Has a vocabulary good enough that he does not have to resort to cursing
Job: Detective/ Prosecutor
Family: Máthir a white Pegasus mare with green eyes and a rose pink mane and works as a high school English teacher. Dr.Sprocket a brown unicorn stallion with blue eyes and a sliver mane who is in the equestrian marine corp engineering core. He is a doctor in mechanical engineering
Romance: Has never been in one relationship and that lasted a three weeks to a month with a grey Pegasus mare named broken heart.
Story: He lives in the city of manehatten and attends a school for mentally impaired foals. He is impaired with a condition known as Asperger syndrome which makes him very intelligent but also very bad a making friends. One day the police come to him for help on a case because they say he is a very intelligent foal. So at the young age of 6 he becomes a detective. At some point he has the chance of meeting Princess Celestia to praise him for his work. But she never expected a foal.
Future: After he graduates from college he now has his doctorate in law and works as a detective in manehatten. He also becomes a slight alcoholic that at times gets in the way of his work
How did I make this OC: Shortly after watching the anime Death note. I thought what if I made an oc that was slightly based off the detective in the show Simply named L. L is very mysterious in his work and is often having strange habits, but he always seems to see the slightest of hints. Next one of my friends had a lawyer Oc so I thought it would be fun if I made an OC that was a Prosecutor. The Prosecutor side of him was based of Miles Edgeworth from the phoenix wright series. I say Miles because he always seemed to be the aggressive but also able to keep his head cool type of person. So yeah that's where I got my oc from.
Maybe this will get written