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AppleTank


Male. Los Angeles, California. Hmm. I have a WPM of 65. Meh. Occasionally arts. Lord of Dorkness's #1 fan. User #26976. inb4 Crossover

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  • 37 weeks
    Random Idea #84: Aeroformula

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  • 62 weeks
    Random Idea #83: Sword vs Gun fights (in visual media)

    I had some shower thoughts after watching some various fight shows, specifically about choreography. So, I assume we’re all broadly familiar with sword fights.

    Note that “gun” and “sword” here are simply shorthand for any ranged, projectile weapon and any melee weapon, punches and kicks included.

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  • 69 weeks
    Idea #82: A random review of Cyberformula: Road to the Infinity 1 to 4

    The audience for this game outside of Japan is probably in the low hundreds, but after binging the games for the past two weeks, I needed some way to organize my thoughts.

    First of all, what is Cyberformula?

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  • 81 weeks
    Idea #75: Worldbuiling Bonus 1

    Bonus content to Idea #75: Worldbuilding

    Sonic Franchise
    Seriously, how the hell did I forget about the franchise memetically associated with hundreds of fan OCs?
    1) Setting: Mobius and other various locales seem to imply a fairly Earth like world [1]
    2) Inhabitants: waves hand in the vague direction of sonic OCs [1]

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  • 113 weeks
    Random Idea #81: Complaining about Scale in third person POV games

    In most games at human-scale, and even car scale to a certain extent, the 3rd POV doesn’t greatly change how large things appear to be. Your avatar is still going to look small when standing next to a large truck. The game “It Takes Two” is a great example of this, since the characters are shrunk to the size of dolls and tossed into the insides of machines and snowglobes. A gear the size of a

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Nov
19th
2014

Random Idea #10 (Part 2) · 8:23am Nov 19th, 2014

Possible title: Cutter
Poster: Person staring bewildered at the "camera", standing two feet in different locations and a wipe in between directly behind him.
Plot synopsis. Person going through a normal life. Several scenes later, starts feeling paranoid, that something is watching him. Over time, the feeling gets more and more prevalent until he sees a ghostly boom mike hovering above him, when he stares at it, it slowly floats backwards until it disappears into a wall. Slow, 360 around him as he starts seeing the flickering images of a movie set. Starts getting panicky, can't go to his job or whatever.

Over time, he gets used to it, but remains extremely twitchy, and his room becomes an utter mess. Becomes an utter recluse, barely says anything personal because they're always watching, why won't they go away, damn it. Somewhat like a darker version of "stranger than fiction." One night, gets mugged. Gets more pissed off than he should be at losing 200 bucks because he figures that somebody is screwing with him. For no apparent reason, there is nobody on the street around him despite clearly hearing traffic and seeing pedestrians minutes before. Wishes he had something to fight back. When mugger turns away to run, he shakes his fist. Fist is off screen. Sudden bang. MC stares dumbly at the pistol he never owned in his hand, and it clearly looks cheaply made, and probably shouldn't even work since its made of plastic. He tosses it away in surprise. It flies offscreen, where it disappears. Another pan, with even more flickering, and even a slight outline where the "frames" are. He realizes he can stick his hand off screen, and can pick things up.

He closes his eyes, reaches out, and grabs his home's doorknob.

Plot development:
Blah blah

Movie ends with the actual actor feeling woozy, bags and bloodshot eyes. Some implication that he was completely healthy the night before somehow. Gets out of bed to go the the bathroom to wash his face. In the mirror, however, is the "character" from the movie, who has figured out how to send his entire self off screen. Reaches offscreen one final time, with bags and bloodshot eyes, for the pistol he pulled out the very first time (maybe a easter egg shot of the gun not even having a magazine loaded at this point) and aims at the actor with a crazed grin. Whispers, "I'm free, bitches."
White flash.
Black.

Report AppleTank · 294 views · #random idea #jump cut
Comments ( 2 )
Hap

That sounds interesting.

You'll want to change the title though. The word "cutter" outside of a nautical context generally refers to a person who cuts themselves compulsively, and I don't think that's what you're going for here.

2604404
Everything hyphypothetical anyways.
I'm bad with naming things.

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