Lazarus Chapter Rough Draft Nearly Finished · 3:05am Oct 30th, 2014
Just need a couple more thousand words, and the draft will be finished. Now don't start getting your hopes up, this doesn't mean that it's near posting yet. I still need to run this through my army of editors (if that is they're still around after my long absence), and depending on their opinion, or my own, I may need to run a few revisions (mainly of specific scenes), or I cut something out.
As of the moment the chapter is about 6,000+ some words (not counting the one scene I cut out). The finish product, and this is a rough estimation, should roughly be close to 7,000-8,000+ some words. Just to make up for all the weeks I've been gone, and if things go according to plan "1st contact" *devious smile* "maybe" around the corner *evil laugh*.
So all in all I might not get it out before Halloween, especially that horror story I started writing which is a shame. With school going on I was distracted with actual work that'll determine my future instead of writing horse words 
damn future always screwing me up! So I only ended up with a few thousand words written, then I also got distracted with Lazarus and this cool awesome action sequence (oops I said too much 
) I was writing.
Sooooo yeah, Halloween story will be late. But who cares, you don't need to read horror stories around Halloween time, if things go my way I can get it up before Thanksgiving.
Well keep watch for the next two weeks cause Lazarus maybe popping up again in your feed-box with hopefully a slightly better if not box smashingly better chapter then last one's.
what about that story "what am I?" you working on that?
Well I for one am still alive.
Also, for those who can't wait for Nebula to actually finish his chapter I propose a thought experiment which I may or may not have stolen from Schrödinger. (probably spelled that wrong)
1. Close your eyes. Shit wait! Read the rest of the instructions first!
2. Think of your bookshelves tab.
3. Now since you aren't currently monitoring your computer you have no idea whether or not the new chapter has been posted.
4. Since you are unaware of the chapters status it can be assumed that the chapter is currently posted while symiltaniously not being posted.
5. While your at it also imagine that there is now a 1 billion dollar check from Donald Trump sitting on your keyboard. Then imagine giving said check to me.
See everything worked out. You get a new chapter and I get richer. All with the power of science.
I am here too to clean things up.
2563447 you're a funny one.
2563447
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No worries man, we're still here. Well, I know I am at least. And just to get me back in the swing of things
:
' should go after 'I was writting'
Line 1: unneeded comma
Line 2: period after 'editors';
if that isThat is, if; drop the parenthesesLine 3: replace first comma w/ a period
Line 4:
As of the momenteither 'As of right now' or 'At the moment', not bothLine 5: replace the period w/ a semicolon
Line 6: replace the comma w/ a period; drop the 'and'; add a comma after 'plan'; never use quotation marks for emphasis;
maybemay beLine 8: Wut? That is amazingly awkwardly phrased.
Line 9: 'that' is not a word you can make contractions of (at least not with 'will')
Line 10: add a period after that Twilight
Line 11: the 'oops I said too much
Line 13: add a question mark after 'who cares'
Line 14: add a period after 'time'
Line 15: add a comma after 'Well'; it is 'cause, not cause (note the apostrophe);
maybemight be; 'popping up in your feed box again; add a period after 'again'Line 16: switch the positions of 'with' & 'hopefully';
one'stimeYup. I still got it! You aren't the only one back in school!
I'm ready to edit that chapter when ever you send it to me (unless, of course, I have a project or something, but shhhh). I even have my sentence diagramming cheat sheet with me! 
2563477 A man walks into a potion store and he doesn't. Also may I inquire as to what the hell that video was from?
2563504 Hi wulf!
2563520 It's from a guy who makes these randomish short stories and acts as characters from them by changing his face with distortion. Chek it:
[youtube=5u4tQlVRKD8]
Also, check out this Potion Seller manga (found @ /r/potionseller):
i.imgur.com/zyRRkGg.jpg
2563445 What Am I is a side project Tesla Ponie and I are working on in our spare time (usually after every Lazarus post I tend to it for a day.), it's being worked on. Just at a snails pace.
2563445 I'm one of the editors With that and as far as I know development has stalled in the middle if a rewrite on wai.
And yep, I'm still here. Mid terms are over so as long as it's finished within the next month I should have a decent amount of time to bash on this forthcoming chapter.
(And wai if you feel like it)