my ideas · 2:05am Oct 22nd, 2014
long time no see everypony. Iv been thinking. yea, yea i know what they say thinking is a dangerous past time. Well that never stoped me before. iv decided to put a hold on my story A War of Realms. The few of you that care may ask why. well thats quite simple, im not happy with it. I dont like how iv played Celestia, and im not happy with the general feel of my story. I was too focused on cracking jokes that i failed to give the reader a good emotional conection with the characters of my story. for this I am deeply sorry. I feel that my only option is to re-wright the story starting with chapter 2. Despite what I have said I am veary happy with the first chapter and beleve it will be a good foundation to build a story with a deeper emotional conection and a more serious feel. There will still be funny parts but less often. I plan to work closer with my good friend Mister WickedLSDragon and actualy meet in person with him on a regular basis in order to futher devlope this story. If any of you feel that you have gained any enjoyment from my wrighting than please send me a PM with Ideas or even constructive criticism. Even if there is something you dont like than please tell me so I know where I can do better. Intell I am ready to began releasing new chapters to War of Realms I plan to wright a few one shots to test the waters so to speak. Ill probably start my one shots with some basic ideas and eventualy I might try my hoof at cloop. I thank all of thoes that have given their time to view my work and I do hope to see everypony again
