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Oct
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A Whovian Christmas - rewritten! · 1:17am Oct 18th, 2014

I wasn't too impressed with 'A Whovian Christmas', and I guess I wasn't the only one who had a problem with it. The ending was just jarring and shifted the tone a little too much.

I have re-written the ending from Derpy's perspective rather than Doctor Whooves', and hopefully kept the tone a bit better. The original ending is still there, but it is down as a separate ending now. I don't do so well with deleting stuff, and I guess whenever I re-write stuff, I'll probably keep all the originals there as a sort of 'deleted scenes' kind of thing.

Speaking of alternative endings, I've always played around with the idea of a Goosebumps style 'make a choice and turn to such-and-such a page'. I might try that at some point...

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