Rage Reviewed

So yeah, don't know if you've noticed, but 2D-kun did a review on the fic, explaining all the bad things in it and what I should avoid.

In other words, why didn't any of you guys tell me my characters were either douche-y or edgy?

Seriously though, because of this, I will do a rewrite of the first (and possibly second) chapter so I can progress the story better knowing that I have done the character development justice. Heck, I may even get an editor or a proofreader in the meanwhile.

That is all, now go to your corner and think about what you did.