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Pickleless


A man is driving home, thinking about beating his wife. Along the way, he passes a turtle. I am that turtle.

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Oct
3rd
2014

Changeling Doll Q&A closed. · 1:28am Oct 3rd, 2014

I feel it's important to have a story tell itself. If I, the author, have to explain something about it, then I did a bad job. I am posting chapters weekly to monthly though, and sometimes it's not good to let questions sit and stir. So I might be a good idea if I make something clear.

The Changeling Doll has a plot. Like, an actual plot with a conflict and goal to reach. It's not going to be a super serious dark deadly plot, but there is a plot. Now, the genre is heavily based on the attitude of the characters and narrative of the story, and a lot of what makes this comedy is how Stupid Doll treats his situation. So with that being said, Stupid Doll is going to treat the conflict of this plot the same way he's treating Twilight. This is a comedy/romance story. It's going to stay a comedy/romance story, don't worry. 1 out of every 3 to 4 chapters is probably going to be more plot than comedy, and every chapter is going to have a moment with plot happening. This doesn't mean I lured you in with comedy/romance and pulled a switch-bait for drama, the comedy will be there from beginning to end. This I promise you. This was just the first chapter where I actually had to make things roll and it was kinda hard to do. You might have noticed it wasn't a super good chapter. Sorry about that.

So was Pinkie going crazy important for the plo-

Yes, yes it is. If it makes you feel better Stupid didn't see it coming either.

So, considering people are left a little fuddled, I figured it might be smart to host a little Q&A. You could ask a character something and I'll respond with said character, but if you ask me directly you'll probably get an easier to understand answer. If you try to question Twilight's beliefs on if he's a doll or not, I'm gonna be evasive since that's going to be somewhat addressed in the next chapter.

Go crazy.

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Comments ( 32 )

Stupid... does Twilight know about your dimension hopping into parallel story worlds and meeting with a prankster that probably rivals most changelings?

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"She doesn't, and I sincerely hope she never finds out I've been flirting with her alternate self.

Do you worry about Chrysalis finding you or finding out what you are up to?

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*Assuming that's towards Stupid.*
"Yes, that's actually my second biggest concern actually. My third would be Celestia finding out about me, followed by Twilight. My biggest concern is a secret."

So... Stupid... What is the most attractive part of Twilight Sparkle?

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Please, technical terms, for accuracy.

Excuse me Stupid......but can you give a HINT as to where your associates went off to?


That all being said I will just put here my initial thought when I ran across this story originally

'This is either the best plan ever conceived...or the dumbest idea ever.

I can't wait to find out.'

Hey, Pickleless, I really think that both the romantic and comedy aspects are very well done. Which is why I favorite the story. The mystery parts...could use some work. Like, most readers skip over stutters and mistakes in dialogue so its best not to have them be the only foreshadowing for an upcoming plot twist.

Anyway, my question is, what do you like most about your story? Is it the romance between stupid and Twilight (which is pretty freaking adorable, got diabeetus at least twice:heart:)? Beating up stupid? Or something else?

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"WELL, I have to say I get a little rush whenever I see her flippity floppers flippy flop. Makes me want to nibble on them. Her paraspite whip is as soothing for me to pet as it is for her to get petted. The most attractive part, as cheesy as this sounds, is her pony peepers when she's angry or confused. She just makes the cutest face..."
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"People seem to assume Cadence didn't get one. I thought everyone would draw the conclusion that Celestia and Luna live in the same castle, close to each other.

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"Thanks! Comedy is one the only things I can do well, so I work it to the best of my ability. My favorite part?.. Well, what's probably going to be my favorite part is the romance between Stupid and Twilight. It really hasn't started yet. I'm looking forward to the next chapter because that's when things actually get romantic. My current favorite part is the first chapter actually. I'm not really sure why. Usually the beginning of stories are always my favorite."

"Look closely at certain slip ups! I've given hints no one has even commented on! Not even my editors! Uuuuuuugh I'm a sucker for spoiling things too!"

Hey Stupid, can you see why foals like Cinnamon Toast Crunch?

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Wait, Stupid...you mean this isn't an officially sanctioned Changeling operation? You and your collaborators are doing this all on your own?

If so, it implies something really serious, especially since indications point towards you having really strong feelings developing towards Twilight. If that's the case...if Chrysalis started to take action, and you had to choose between Chrysalis and the hive or warning Twilight...what would you choose?


To Pickleless, are we going to see anything of Stupid Doll's compatriots?

Dear Doll,

Would you like to swing on a star? Or would you rather be a pig?

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"No, and I tried being a bowl of it once to find out. It ended horribly."

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"I'd warn Twilight in a heartbeat. I'm not just worried of Chrysalis finding out for Twilight's sake..."

"I'm strongly considering it. I already have an idea on what to do with one of them. I'm also considering either just making it a separate story or encouraging someone else to write a fic of it. What inspired me to make the Changeling Doll is my love for seeing changelings going undercover, but I also love characters interacting with a changeling's true form or knowing they're a changeling. I wanted to try and make a situation where both are present at the same time. I also would very much love to read a story where both are present that wasn't written by me."

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"I'd rather be a pig. Pigs are really cool."

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Stupid, can ponies and Changelings cross-breed?


Pickleless, if the Stupid doesn't know the answer to my question, what is the 'Word of the Author' on the matter?

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"Of course they can't."

"Yes they can, and it has already caused him problems in the story."

So Stupid... Why Twilight? What was it that drew you to her in the first place?

And of all the orders she's given you so far, what was your favourite?

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They can? What's the result? Is it when the Changeling is in natural form, or does it have to happen when the Changeling is in pony form? All other technical details please!

And why does Stupid think it's impossible? And how's it caused him problems?

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"Well, without giving anything away, I can definitely say one reason I chose Twilight is because I have a crush on her. My favorite order was to stay safe. It wasn't the order itself, but rather what she felt that morning. I was very touched."

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"In the order you asked: Yes. Something mind breaking. A changeling in it's natural form. Male changelings make ponies, female changelings make changelings. No changeling or pony knows they can crossbreed. The ones that did took it to the grave. It's caused him problems because -SPOILERSPOILERSPOILER- and that's how Equestria was made.

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If a pony is impregnated by a Changeling, will the child inherit Changeling characteristics, or the capacity to link to the hive mind?

...do Changelings have a hive mind in this continuity?

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"Yes they can, and this is why he's having problems. The Hive-Mind is a thing in this fic."

*Running off squealing to play Hyrule Warriors for an hour or two.* Don't feel ignored if I stop replying. I will continue this when I get back. Feel free to keep asking things.*

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...is Stupid Doll the result of a stallion impregnating a female Changeling?

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"Nope, the guy is a pure changeling. Nice to know your on the wrong thought process. Shows I didn't give away too much."

Is the reveal going to be soon?

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"I would say it's about three chapters away."

Pickleless,
So are there multiple Stupid Doll's or just 2 other changelings that stemmed from Stupid?

Stupid,
Did you multiply or something?

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And please tell me it's not going to take a dark turn like many of the stories I've read that deal with this topic.

So we know there are three changeling "dolls" one is Stupid/Poker Face I'm guessing based on the latest chapter that their names are White Lie and Quick wit. As stated in a previous question one of them is probably staying with Cadence and one is staying with Celestia and Luna.

Now I assume the one staying in Canterlot sent the letter to Twilight to cover his alibi and that it took so long to get a reply is trying to do it so Celestia or Luna don't notice. What strikes me odd is that the letter is signed with Poker Face instead of any of the other names seeing as Poker Face is the one in Ponyville.

Now my actually question to Stupid. Seeing as this is a plan Chrysalis doesn't know about is the plan to show to the princesses that changelings aren't "evil" and can live together?

Twilight, how do you feel sharing your doll with everyone else now that they (at least your best friends) know what he is capable of and what he has been doing like setting up Fluttershy and Big Mac?

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"Haha, what? No. There's just three dolls, they didn't grow off of Stupid."

"That is an illusion changelings can do, but no I haven't."

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This is a comedy/romance story. It's going to stay a comedy/romance story, don't worry. 1 out of every 3 to 4 chapters is probably going to be more plot than comedy, and every chapter is going to have a moment with plot happening. This doesn't mean I lured you in with comedy/romance and pulled a switch-bait for drama, the comedy will be there from beginning to end. This I promise you.

"Stupid will deal with it as he deals with Twilight."

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"That's the outcome we want to happen. So far we're thinking we'll have to go with plan B."

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"I don't like him meddling in other ponies' love lives! I'm worried about him taking advantage of others too. Whoever he was before he became a doll was a total flirt."

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I think tatsurou was on the right track but got the character a bit wrong. Is Pinkie a cross-breed, giving rise to her Pinkie Sense™?

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"Looking at the story objectively, it could've only been her, Rainbow Dash, Twilight, or Stupid. Those are the only four that have been given significant screen time. I ruled Stupid out. Pinkie and Twilight would be the logical choices as they are the only ones who have given Stupid abusive levels of trouble."

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