Possible rewrite. · 4:59am Oct 2nd, 2014
I never really got an answer the first time I asked. Are you guys cool with a rewrite? What I am wanting to do is basically just go back over and make the story flow better, add and remove details. And I am also wanting to hear from you guys about what we can do better.
You guys are the biggest reason why the story progressed as far as it did. I never thought that the story would get so many positive reactions to be real honest, and I want you all to be involved; give critiques, ideas, I want you to be actively engaged. Thank you guys so much.
Spartan-1138 Signing off.