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ManlyDerp


A writer who grew from their many mistakes, and who still loves ponies deeply.

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  • 135 weeks
    MLP: A New Generation Thoughts

    Howdy howdy~

    Derply here dropping off some quick thoughts on the introduction to Gen Five that just dropped today on Netflix!

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  • 142 weeks
    Poisoned Update (Entry 10)

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    Derply here with another Poisoned Update! This time we have Entry 10, Bridle Gossip! I've been eagerly waiting to get to this episode for a while now, and I've got some really fun stuff planned for it! I can't wait to share it with you ^_^

    In the meantime, here's how much progress I've made on it so far since the last time I've spoken with ya'll!

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  • 151 weeks
    Chapter Release Date (Poisoned Update)

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  • 152 weeks
    Poisoned Update (Entry 9)

    Howdy howdy~

    You know the drill by now, folks! I'M A DESPERATE ATTENTION HORSE WHO NEEDS CONSTANT VALIDATION I'm a swell lass who likes to keep you updated :) Below you'll find where I'm currently at with the next update of The Poisoned Barb's Tale!

    That having been said, here we goooooo:

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  • 157 weeks
    Eye's are bigger than my stomach (Poisoned Update)

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    Derply here with a quick update! The next three chapters of The Poisoned Barb's Tale shall be releasing Monday, Wednesday, and Friday of this coming week...

    … That's it. That's the whole update.

    See you then!

    … Still here?

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Sep
29th
2014

Reader Poll! The death of comedy (Er, or at least the tag) · 2:09am Sep 29th, 2014

Howdy howdy! Despite the title's name, this is going to be a pretty cheery blog post!

So, the latest two chapters of "If you ain't..." came out, including the infamous chapter 9 that I was so worried about posting. SO worried in fact that I decided to hold if off a week, working on it on and off as I wrote up chapter 10...

... and the results were very positive! Yay! Thanks guys and gals; you really made my day!

Now then, I said I would do this last time so I feel as though I need to stick to it. Let's have a poll!

This is for those of you who have finished chapter 10! Although it looks like there's a light at the end of the tunnel, have no fear! We'Re NoT aT tHe ClImAx YeT! Mahahah!!

... Ahem. Anywhose; here's what this poll is about! As you may have noticed, while the jokes keep on a comin', the seriousness levels have indeed increased. So, here's my question for you guys; is the comedy tag now a bit misleading to those who are only now starting to read this story? Would it make more sense to drop the tag and stick to slice of life, despite the jokes that I'll still be adding? Tell me below what you think! I'll be totaling things up between now and when the next chapters are up, so you've got plenty of time to voice your opinions!

On that note, Chapter 11 will be coming out with Chapter 12 next month! I'm in the middle of exam season right now, sadly, so probably no updates this weekend... but that just means I can either work on the quality like I did with chapter 9, work on the quantity like I did for chapters 4-7, OR BOTH! How crazy would THAT be?

Well, that's I'll I got for ya! Have a good week now!

-Derply

Comments ( 10 )

Both Q's would be pretty insane. :derpytongue2:

Also you make this decision hard. Because even if more jokes come to pass, especially now that Discord has arrived, it still has that couple of chapter bits of non-comedy focus. It makes me very tempted to say drop the comedy tag . Though I wouldn't be 100% sure because somehow you could pull the next chapters making this go a complete 180 from the semi-serious turn it was in. (until very recently)

Sadly I guess that doesn't count as an actual poll answer. Sorry for my giant wall of pointless text. :facehoof:

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Nah, it wasn't pointless at all! You voiced your opinion; that's all I really wanted :twilightsmile:

Let me make this perfectly clear to EVERYONE; the story is already set in stone! Everything with Discord, everything with Big Mac, everything with Applejack and Twilight and Rarity and Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash and Caramel and Mr. Cake and the climax and the ending+epilogue ARE ALL ALREADY PLANNED OUT, THEY JUST NEED TO BE WRITTEN UP!!!

All this poll is about is whether or not you guys feel as though the tags are now misleading. It's both a comedy and a slice of life, but it sometimes dips into areas that one doesn't normally see in a comedy, which is why I'm asking.

Thanks again for your opinion! Sorry I countered your wall of text with one of my own :rainbowlaugh:

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A-HA, no need to apologize, because I shall counter your wall countering with a wall of my own! :trixieshiftright:

WALL WAR :pinkiegasp:

Okay, anyway I guess for the sake of purging any misleadingness, I'll make a more clear cut vote for removing the comedy tag.

Since we aren't allowed to use a more fine-grained tagging method, I just say make it slice of life. If you want, prepend/append (Comedy) or (Sad) or whatever to each chapter title, then people can have a more clear representation of how the story will be when they arrive. (Plus in text form you can use BOTH tags for some chapters! Ain't that a hoot? :pinkiecrazy:)

I've only seen the chapter-text-title-tagging on one other story as of late, so I got the idea from that.

And now I'm done. I swear no more walls from me :rainbowlaugh:
...unless you want to help me build a house. :trollestia:

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Do you want to build a wall house~? :derpytongue2:

... Oh crap! I can't think of anything else to type! The foundation is falling all around us! :raritydespair:

*One destroyed house made of words later...*

:derpyderp2: I just don't know what... oh you know the rest :ajsleepy:

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I want to build a wall house~
Noooo, we only needed one more wall :fluttershbad:
WAIT, we can use our smaller walls to make a giant foldey wall!

WE CAN BUILD A GARAGE! :rainbowhuh:
Though...that doesn't actually take care of the collapsed foundation...crepes:facehoof:

I feel the comedy tag should stay. Though do put a note in the title card that there will be sad moments in the story.

It depends on what you're going for. I would recommend a shift to a more serious tone, and off the comedy tag. And I'm saying this even though I hate sappy fics like the later parts of this. But I need to suck it up and say what is true.

It started off very comedy, as long as it ends with some comedy as well, I think the tag should stay. A comedy tag doesn't mean that every chapter has to be funny, or that none can be serious. It only relates to the general tone of the story.

Can't decide... I'll be back later.

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