Call for Editors for 'A Mighty Demon Slayer Grooms Some Ponies' Chapter 8 · 3:15am Sep 22nd, 2014
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By the time this is over, Celestia's hair will look fabulous.
Chapter 8 of A Mighty Demon Slayer Grooms Some Ponies is not done yet, but I'd like editors to look over what I have. What I have is the final scene, which is over 4,000 words long. I am still contemplating how to lead into it; I might append it, after some modifications, to a revised version of the horse show portion of the previously posted chapter, or I might come up with something else, like a scene of Danny and Pinkie making out or something.
But, considering the reaction to the previous version, I'd like some readers to look over this portion before I proceed further. The downside of volunteering to edit would, of course, be that you would get the ending spoiled before the chapter is complete.
Oh, and anyone who volunteers to edit must also agree to Pinkie-swear to secrecy.
If you are interested, drop me a private message and I will send you the link to Google Docs. The call is specifically for people who've read the previous seven chapters.
*gaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaasp*
You said it was cancelled! Omygosh this is gonna be awesome!
*Gives you a great big hug*
I've read the previous 8 chapters!
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Do you even know how dextrous a
horse'spony's lips are!...
Oh Danny boy!
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He-he-he-he-he-he *gigglesnort*!
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As it happens, dexterous lips play a very important role in this chapter.
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I think you mean XXXENOPHILE, right?
Any hints about how far along the editing is? If no one wants to say that's alright, but I am curious.