Damnit, back to the drawing board.

So... I'm going to come clean. Right now I'm trying to write a clop story, not one that's only one chapter where they screw and it ends, I want to write one that's not just concentrated on sex but has you get really invested in the characters. Another thing is the characters are human, save for Discord (I believe even if he had the choice he'does still be a draconaqus. ) It failed so I'm trying to rewrite it while keeping it what I want. So after hours I think I thought of a way to do it, the only problem, I need to change the description as well as where the first chapter is going. I know I can do it, it's a good idea damnit, I just have to get my shit together.