Here's A Preview (Spoiler) of the NSFW I made... · 4:39am Sep 20th, 2014
Although, it's gory and not yet related to Sex like the theme should have, I'll let you guys wondering Here's a Sneak Peak on One of the Parts of the story... Hope you find this Mysterious Enough~ READ HERE
Also, I'm free to any comments at the moment, let me see if it fits the criteria of Gore/NSFW to it... (And yeah, the NSFW part is still at working progress~)
Good outline, needs work.
2469076 Please tell me what do you mean by..."Needs work"
2469127 Just some of the wording, grammar, and phrasing. Especially tense.
2470777 well, uh... Well you see, it's supposed TO turn into first-person, third-person or second-person.... To give different perspective or look-about.