Ok, so I kinda fell off the face of the planet again and was able to macgyver a way back using a wet network cable, a bottle of nitroglycerine, an old tire, and a rocket pack frame. Then I spent two weeks trying to pull my head out of the bedrock. Anyways, here's a double dose of Game of Fate.
Done, I think I got all the glitches out of it. Please poke me if you notice something off kilter. Now if you excuse me, I have to have round 42 with this worthless modem. Oh, and I'm-a puttin' chapter 5 up soon.
Finally got to the edit function without any 502's stopping me, anyways, I poked prodded and examined, and I think that CH 1 is a bit better (albeit longer). Eventually Ch 2 will update.
Mechanist's Flutter is uploaded, split in two to try and avoid the single 10k word document. The events that unfold added the Adventure and Comedy tags as well as an extra main character.