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Wrabbit

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  • 328 weeks
    Revamp 3: Revenge of the Vamp

    Okay, Last of the TSW series revamped. I changed the focus of Golden Bit's plot, so it hopefully makes a little more sense, but try not to expect miracles, here. Anything more intensive would have required practically rewriting the whole story, and I'm definitely not doing that. I was going to do more with the final chapter, but honestly, I just want to move on to newer stories. I'd rather

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  • 348 weeks
    Slight Revamp 2: The Revampening part 2

    Okay. So. I have come up with an alternate subplot for Golden Bit that I think will work. However, this is going to require a much more intensive rewriting of the story, especially the later chappies. The first few chappies are going to be just like the previous two arcs, with mainly just corrections, and updating the Equish to my new standard. Later on... well, it's gonna get different.

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  • 348 weeks
    Slight Revamp 2: The Revampening

    Okay, so I Would Do Anything for Love, the second story in the TSW series has been... adjusted. Mistakes corrected, Equish words updated, and Celestia's badassery scene lengthened. This is one of the original criticisms of this story that bugged me upon reflection. I gave her this grand build up, only for her to falter because the clock ran out. So now, she pushes on a little and... No. You want

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  • 349 weeks
    Slight revamp

    So, I was wondering whether to add another chapter to Amore Obbligato, or to a non-pony story I'm working on, when I decided, "You know what? This is as good a time as any to finally clean up TSW!" So, here we are, with me going through the story, correcting old mistakes that were missed, adding some clarifications, and generally making all the details and words used compliant with later sequels.

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  • 372 weeks
    Question for any Italian speakers out there

    So, in writing up my newest chapter of Amore Obbligato, I've run into a small problem with which I was hoping my readers can help. As you know, the story revolving around Octavia and Twilight, there's going to be a lot of musical terms, most of which are Italian in origin. That being said, I thought it would be cute if Octavia and her mother have cute little musical nicknames for each other. To

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    11 comments · 395 views
Jun
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Blog th third · 8:14pm Jun 12th, 2012

Welp, started chapter four, and I'm happy to say that I'm a third of the way through page three already. I'm kinda surprised at how well this story is going, writing-wise. I've only had two others just flow out like this. Let's hope it keeps up for a long while to come ::knocks on wood:: And to all who have been so supportive, I want to say thank you. I've finally gotten an idea for some cover art, and will be posting it when it's finished. Oh, and I hope that you all don't mind, but I'm gonna steal some of your ideas that you're so kind as to inspire with your comments. Some of them are simply TOO delicious to leave lingering like that. ^_^

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The Lone Shadow
The Lone Shadow #1 · Jun 12th, 2012 · · ·
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I really hope you're thinking of the comments I am. :ajsmug:

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