Mon Petite Bichon · 2:52am Aug 24th, 2014
New story! New story!! MY FIRST CLOP, too!
Here is a sneak peek; tell me if you are interested in what I have to offer.
Titled;
Mon Petite Bichon
‘Damn him and the hooves he rode in on!”
So thought Luna as she stormed into the cave, fists clenched. It was a shallow cave, but deep enough for the mare to be sheltered from the rain that was sure to come; the smell was heavy in the air, and the dampness pressed against her skin like a thin blanket, sure to rip at any moment.
As her deep blue eyes dilated to accommodate the dark, Luna began to pace back and forth, muttering to herself. “Stupid, arrogant, narrow-minded, stubborn obstinate stallions!” Her tongue spat out the words in a bitter tune. “Who did he think he was, anyways? Talking to me like that, I should have given him a good hoof stomping while I had the chance!”
What had stopped her? Luna wondered as she brushed her dark hair out of her face, leaning against the cave wall. Surely it wasn’t out of her manners, because this stallion, this stalwart ass, didn’t deserve any politeness from her, and she hadn’t given any. The time for banalities had long since been abandoned in the past. No, this stallion was way past any of that, so it wasn’t out of the fact that her parents had raised her to be perfect mare at all times, that she refrained.
So, then what did?
-End Snippit-
...So? I know, doesn't reveal much, but.......? Think it has potential?
Sounds delightfully...naughty.
2395476 But you ain't see nothing yet. I realize the snippit sorta sucked ^^
is it anthro?
I think it has potential, but I can't tell much from the sneak peek. In my opinion, you should write it. Worst comes to worst, you write the first chapter, people don't like it, and you continue with a different story. Anyway, until next time
2395485 Mmmhm
Interesting. I'll probably read this. More likely for the story than the porn.
2396718 Yeah, that is what I am striving for - more of a plot/story behind all of it, and hints of clop. So yeah. ^^ Stay tuned!!
This small piece has already got me asking questions to this story. Which is good thing cause now I'll want to check it out. (I'm gonna quote from a movie here now because I like to.)
"Miss you had my curiosity but now you have my attention."
2397062 Stay tuned, then!! :D