Aug
18th
2014
AHHHHHHHH! · 4:49pm Aug 18th, 2014
I am screaming! Seriously! Only my second chapter on Sundown and its gotten featured! My only explanation is that its a slow day for the feature box! there must be better stories out there!
No matter the reason I am so happy that I somehow made it to that coveted box. I didn't even dare to hope this story would be so well received. I feel terrible that I write so badly now. Thank you all for this. I am going to lay down and stare at the ceiling for like 12 hours now. I will try to update faster now and to up the overall quality of the chapters as well. Thank you all so much.
edit: Heh, that was short lived! Still it made me happy it got up there for the like... 10 minutes it did.
My honest opinion: yes, you don´t have exactly Shakespeare-level story there...but you have a very honest and interesting story and it deserves to be featured. Unfortunally i have to use a proxy tunnel to acess this site (ISP at work blocks EVERYTHING) so it messes with page code and i can´t upvote your history. But it has potential.
Keep the good work !
2380276 Thanks for your honesty! I am well aware that I don't have the gift of the golden keyboard. I wish I kept up on proxies to have one to recommend to you, but it's been years since I had to dodge high school firewalls. I'm just glad so many like it.
2380293 I hope you don´t get my comment as a criticism. I really hope that this story, and others you may have, keep receiving updates. Just pointing that, the style, the rythim, everything is very simple.
But simple is good. Simple is focused. Simple means you can focus on the history, not being so smart that none, even you, can´t understand what´s going on. With time your style will shine. None borns with the golden keyboard. That´s something one develops.
Sorry for my bad grammar, not a native english speaker...i´m from Brasil.
See ? You already have international fans !
Love this story and even though it is not an entirely original idea "sunset redemption" it deserves the attention that it has because it is unique and a very well written story in what it is portraying.
I'll patiently wait for the next chapter!
2383435 It isn't really that original, but then again I haven't really seen one that goes quite far enough with a depression idea. So I figured, well if no one else has, I might as well do it.