Writing again

I am Back to writing, after the problems I had with my first story I redacted it and will be putting it back up.. probably.. maybe when its revised and fixed. I realised there were to many problems and I just had not practised writing enough to begin submitting. Now that said I have now uploaded a new story I have written and proof read the first two chapters. Or rather the Prologue and Manehattan Stories - Chapter one. Though I will admit I didn't do an amazing job I now write not to please others but to please myself. After all it should be me first right?
If you read it and enjoy it then I'm glad. If not, I'm still glad just means it wasn't for you aye.

Proof readers and All ideas are always welcome. But don't feel obliged to do anything. I wouldn't.