TSecond Princess of the Night
MLP: FiM
Dark
Adventure
With King Sombra gone, is Equestria truely safe from harm? Or will another foe as old as the Crystal Kingdom itself appear now that the dark unicorn's position of evil is vacant? What new danger will threaten the land and the Elements of Harmony?
Twilight
OC
Main 6
Senyu · 325k words · 1,006 53 · 19k views

2POTN Polishing Finished + Cover art! · 11:31pm Aug 7th, 2014

I have finally finished polishing each chapter in Second Princess of the Night, and have updated the story. What this means is a general improvement to the story grammatically, it's style, and even the addition of a few new scenes. Note that said scenes are minor regarding the plot, meaning you do not have to go back and re-read the story. They are merely revised sections that have reworded certain scenes, or were small additions to add to the chapter. Overall, a total of 2k+ words have been added to the story after all is said and done. My main focus was to cut out much of the exposition (still plenty left unfortunately) and replace with more show than tell. Again, it is not required to re-read the story. However, if you feel like it, please feel free and let me know what you think of the improvements Additionally, I know there will be mistakes somewhere in this repolished version, so please give a shoutout if you see one for me to correct.

With all the polishing done, I can now finally focus on new chapters, so expect those as the next update when I find time to get to it.

And finally, new cover art! (Please note that Ruby/Twilight having batpony wings was an oversight on my end, as I did not specify she would remain as a normal alicorn. The artist is being very awesome and will correct it, then I will update it again.

This was a commisioned by me to fruitbloodmilkshake who's deviantart can be found right here. NSFW! He's a very talented artist and has made some awesome MLP backgrounds, and I recommend giving them a look. There is a link to his stuff in the description of the story as well until he posts the picture in his gallery, and then I can link straight to it from 'source'.

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