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348 weeks
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348 weeks
Slight Revamp 2: The Revampening

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349 weeks
Slight revamp

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372 weeks
Question for any Italian speakers out there

So, in writing up my newest chapter of Amore Obbligato, I've run into a small problem with which I was hoping my readers can help. As you know, the story revolving around Octavia and Twilight, there's going to be a lot of musical terms, most of which are Italian in origin. That being said, I thought it would be cute if Octavia and her mother have cute little musical nicknames for each other. To
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Jun

8th

2012

Blog the second · 3:10am Jun 8th, 2012

Making some pretty amazing progress with the chapter. I'm mostly through page six, but that's also because of the song lyrics I had some of the characters singing. Those tend to take up a lot of space for as few words as they use. Don't worry, it's a song you'll at least recognize, so you can sing along if you like. Best of all, its inclusion into the story isn't contrived at all! O_O In fact, it kinda made me tear up while I was writing it. Excuse me... ::blows nose in tissue::

Finally got around to changing the title to it's final form (there's a DBZ reference in that sentence if you look hard enough :P ), and changed the goofs one of you was kind enough to point out, as well as edited Twilight's and Cheerilee's first meeting in the first chapter. And just to please you, Souldin (okay, he actually inspired me, I admit it), each of the three suitors will have a significant flashback or two in later chapters. I don't know when, but they are coming. I know because I wrote them down on my notes. ^_^ That's all for now. Back to the writing mines! Hi-ho, hi-ho, it's off to write I go...

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