Chapter Draft Completed · 9:57pm Aug 1st, 2014
So, after a year, I finally finished a draft of a chapter in a story. Here's a little preview.
“So,” asked Boss. “We have a deal?”
Patch turned around and leaned back. “You’re not a lesbian, are you?” she asked, her eye narrowing.
Boss balked. “Excuse me?” she asked.
“Well, are you?” asked Patch.
“Uh…” Boss said. “No…”
“Hmm...” said Patch, taking another drink.
Boss opened her mouth to say something when another voice piped up next to them.
“Did I hear something about not being lesbians?”
Boss recognized the voice… but from where? She looked next to her and saw a short earth pony in a white bowler hat. Boss realized at a glance that he wasn’t just really short; he was a colt.
“Well?” he asked again.
“Hey, fuck off,” said Patch. The pistol by her floated just an inch off of the counter.
“Hey, hey…” said the colt, backing up a little. “I was just asking the young mare here,” he said, gesturing to Boss and smiling genially.
“Uhh…” Boss looked at both of them. “Did I miss something?”
Hope that's promising. It'll just be needing the usual proofreads.
