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346 weeks
Slight Revamp 2: The Revampening part 2

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347 weeks
Slight Revamp 2: The Revampening

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347 weeks
Slight revamp

So, I was wondering whether to add another chapter to Amore Obbligato, or to a non-pony story I'm working on, when I decided, "You know what? This is as good a time as any to finally clean up TSW!" So, here we are, with me going through the story, correcting old mistakes that were missed, adding some clarifications, and generally making all the details and words used compliant with later sequels.
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370 weeks
Question for any Italian speakers out there

So, in writing up my newest chapter of Amore Obbligato, I've run into a small problem with which I was hoping my readers can help. As you know, the story revolving around Octavia and Twilight, there's going to be a lot of musical terms, most of which are Italian in origin. That being said, I thought it would be cute if Octavia and her mother have cute little musical nicknames for each other. To
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Jun

7th

2012

Blog the first · 3:27am Jun 7th, 2012

Not sure what else to use these blogs thingies for, so I'm just going to use them to let you know the progress on my stories.

Chapter three for TETSaTW has been started, and is already on page two. This story is shaping up pretty nicely, especially since I now have a definite ending and a plan on getting there. I don't really use outlines, since my preferred method of writing is to just let it flow out naturally. Not quite a stream-of-consciousness kind of thing, but more structured. But with this story, I've got certain events planned as sort of goals or milestones to get into the story, and have written them down so as to not forget them. I haven't forgotten about those of you who have caught my grammatical mistakes, or made suggestions for sprucing up my story, and will eventually get to them.

By the by, does anyone think I should change the title to The Teacher, The Sorceress, and The Wonderbolt? I've also considered using Professor or Pedagogue, but Professor is really for college-level teachers, and pedagogue is easy to misconstrue.

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