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Knight Breeze


Just your average gaming geek/college student. I study computer science, play pathfinder, and write stories, and have a patreon!

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  • 54 weeks
    Xlibris

    Hey, you guys ever hear of Xlibris? I've got an offer from them to publish my book, but I'm getting some shady vibes from some of the reviews I've read about them. Any thoughts?

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  • 55 weeks
    Amazon's changing it's print costs.

    So, as of June 20th, Amazon will be changing its print costs. Specifically, everything is going to be a bit more expensive. If you were on the fence for buying a physical copy of my books, now's the time to change your mind, seeing as how the price is going to increase in a couple of months. Thought I'd give you all the heads up.

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    14 comments · 335 views
  • 56 weeks
    What I Am: Aftermath chapter.

    Hey, guys, I'm writing a conclusion chapter for What I Am. Nothing too substantial, given that a sequel and spin off already exist, but I thought I'd put it down as both a way to let those that don't exactly follow me (or, at the very least, don't follow my blog) know that the second book is out, and also know that A Darkened Sky is about to get a whole lot of chapters.

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  • 57 weeks
    Fool's Gambit.

    Man, did you ever go back and just... cringe at what you did before? That happened to me with Fool's Gambit. The story has plenty of potential, that's not the problem. My problem is with how it's written. The prose is off, there are numerous errors, and I feel like the whole thing is rushed. Like, that first part could have easily been 4-5 chapters longer, and it would have been better for

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    2 comments · 246 views
  • 57 weeks
    Live on Google Play!

    Hey, guys, just wanted you to know that What I've Become and Nightmare of the Past is now live on Google Play! So, if you didn't have a kindle-compatible device before, you can buy both books for 3.99 each right now on Google Play! I'll be working to get them into more outlets during the next couple of days, so keep an eye out for them!

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Jul
27th
2014

Edit to The Nautilus Protocol! · 11:42pm Jul 27th, 2014

So, I've been talking with Pio286 and I made an edit to the latest chapter of The Nautilus Protocol. I removed the three hour time limit I had put before the arrival of the Dridune fleet.
Once I took the time to think about it, having a time limit really limited(hah) me on how I could continue the story. It also limited how much character interaction I could pack into the story before the fleet arrived.
Plus it didn't really make sense, when you take into account how long it would take to mobalize an armada like the one I'm going to be sending against Equestria. The battle will come, its just not going to happen for several chapters.

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Comments ( 9 )

You know what I'm going to do as soon as I see it up. :pinkiecrazy:

2321514
:rainbowlaugh: Yep. My apologies in advance.

Comment posted by Knight Breeze deleted Jul 28th, 2014

2321519 Twas a joke. I actually really appreciate whenever you spot my mistakes.

2321554
Cool cool. Can't wait for more.

Hey, before I forget, do you think you'll do a sequel or spin-off?

2321583 Probably, I'll have to see where this story goes before I make a definitive decision, though.:pinkiehappy:

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That would be awesome.

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