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Between Lines


A purveyor of intelligent literary commentary some of the time, and whatever I feel like the rest of the time.

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  • 295 weeks
    Fallout Equestria: A Star to Steer Her By

    Current word count: 239

    Current Re-write: #11

    Thought of the day: "It's good to be sticking to writing again, even if it's slow."

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  • 377 weeks
    Samurai Jack

    So. I started getting into Samurai Jack now that they're giving it a season 5.

    And I just realized something.

    Nightmare Moon's story is just Samurai Jack from the other perspective.

    4 comments · 683 views
  • 401 weeks
    Sci-fi fans: support this game!

    http://store.steampowered.com/app/476530/

    Finally, someone sat down and did space combat RIGHT. No longer will we have to argue about if "fighters are useless" or the value of the "cube squared law." Finally, we can sit down and say "this works, and this doesn't."

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    3 comments · 576 views
  • 406 weeks
    Stuff I bought with my No Man's Sky refund: Meridian Squad 22 and Valley

    Welcome back to the second and final edition of SIBWMNMSR!

    Today, I'm going to be doing a short post, and this is for two reasons.

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    1 comments · 514 views
  • 407 weeks
    Stuff I bought with my No Man's Sky refund: Duskers

    So! In the wake of the No Man's Sky fiasco, namely it not being half the game it was promised to be, I find myself with 60 bucks in my steam wallet needing somewhere to go. And I figure some of you might be in the same situation. SO, in the spirit of that, I give you:

    STUFF I BOUGHT WITH MY NO MAN'S SKY REFUND

    Today's episode: Duskers!

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Jun
6th
2012

Minor setback. · 7:04pm Jun 6th, 2012

Solutions is going to be delayed. Likely also re-titled. A friend of mine pointed out that Lyra was a non-character as I was writing her, and really he was right. I was going to flesh her out in chapter 3, but I found that I couldn't find a character that made sense in context. There was no 'why' behind the things that she did beyond excusable plot convenience.

I'm going to have to go back to step one and start over. I'm sorry for the delay, and would like to give a special thanks to my beta readers for their assistance with the first draft.

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Comments ( 7 )

I would much rather wait for the improved version that you release.

As the saying goes. if it's worth doing it's worth doing right.

158940

My thoughts exactly. Honestly, if I've had one recurring weakness it's rashness. I was a bit too excited to crank out another adventure rather than something with meaning and gravity.

158948

Yea, that's pretty much the essence of what my first fic was/is. I just finished writing the final chapter after taking a break from it and let me say that it felt good to be writing for my brash overpowered character. I find that writing a 'just for fun' chapter where you just brainstorm random ideas for your character helps to get the ideas flowing for a more realistic chapter.

Looking forward to it, as you well know.

Good on you, as an author you need to be able to be self critical and there are probably many people who would have gone on without giving this issue any futher thought. (Some of the fics I've read here... :ajbemused:)

EDIT: I say and have spelling mistakes in my message

159099

Thanks. I like to think I hold myself to a high literary standard, and part of that is stepping back and starting over when you lose your way.

159105 Good things to look foreward to in the future for us all then.

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