Sister My Sister Fanfic Review · 2:57am Jul 25th, 2014
Recently, I have been taking requests for fanfic reviews. I was originally going to review another story first, but it was much longer. Since this story was a one shot, I thought it would be easier.
Now before I go into the actual review, I'm going to state my opinion overall. I thought that this story was pretty good and I enjoyed it. My pros and cons will be listed towards the end.
This one shot is about the nightmare that consumed Luna had now gotten to Rarity and Sweetie Belle tries to get her real sister back. Basically, it's a Nightmare Rarity story. In the end, Sweetie Belle hugs her and the real Rarity comes back.
Overall, I really liked the story and it was very cute. The characters seemed very, well, in character. And my only cons are only nitpicks.
It happened in the middle of the night. The nightmare that consumed Luna now latched onto another soul.
Can Sweetie Belle help free her sister before things get out of hoof?
I'm just a bit confused on what exactly turned Rarity into Nightmare Rarity. It could be similar to Luna's story, but I would have preferred a bit of clarification. But it really doesn't lessen my enjoyment, so this doesn't really matter. Also, I would've preferred this story being a bit longer. But this is my own personal opinion. It's just that the premise sounds like it would be for a longer story. (if that makes any sense)
However, like I said, I do enjoy this story and it's a good read.
Sister My Sister is by pokefreak13.
Yeah, not the best when it comes to long one shots.
But I'm glad you enjoyed it.