• Member Since 24th Jul, 2014
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Lunerpet


I'm a huge MLP fan, I love Fluttershy the most and I enjoy writing, gaming and making friends.

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  • 447 weeks
    I've been gone but I'm back and better then ever.

    Hello people I just wanted to say I haven't been updating because I've been going through a lot of depression, several reasons and it sucks. but now I have been working on my OC's and redesigning them. as you probably noticed my avatar changed. she's the new and improved Shining Star. she's no longer a clone of my OC Luna Alley. and many or should I say all of my OC's of MLP have gone through a

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  • 455 weeks
    It's been awhile.

    Hey people been awhile and I've been having a blast rewriting again. I was down in the dumps for awhile due to a lot of problems. but thanks to some great supporters and loved ones I got my flare back. so thanks for everything and all the support everypony, Shining Star is best fan pony! wooo!

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  • 480 weeks
    Oh wow...MLP Fandom..just wow.

    I was talking with some friends tonight and I realized something. The MLP fandom is full of LOLI'S!!

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  • 490 weeks
    Hmm.

    Okay nevermind I guess asking others on their opinion doesn't help at all, I waited weeks and got no answer or anything. so thanks for that.

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  • 492 weeks
    Shining Star couples.

    Hello! I'm posting this to get opinions on my OC Shining Star's life. as most should know she is Celestia's adopted daughter, her real father is King Sombra and she's an alicorn. she's a genius with an unmeasurable IQ and loves inventing things. she's socially awkward and is afraid of colts due to never seeing one before and still isn't used to them. and yes, she actually does have tentacles

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Jul
24th
2014

Grammar and greetings. · 9:30am Jul 24th, 2014

Hello, I'm new to the site and yes my grammar sucks, everyone tells me that, all the time, I'm not good at it, I try and I try and it's never enough, at least I don't misspell words, my story's are good but I've learned to accept that not everyone has the same taste as I do and that's cool everyone is special in their own way right? so if my grammar sucks and it messes with people or something, please tell me how I can improve, don't just tell me it's horrible or some bad B rated porno, I do struggle with things. I'm sure everyone does with something, I'd really appreciate that.

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Comments ( 11 )

Browse around some of the editing groups and find yourself someone that can comb your story over for grammar errors. If you really want to improve I'd suggest going over it with them and any time they make a change that you don't understand why they did it, ask them so they can explain the particular grammar rule to you so you don't make a similar mistake in the future.

After that, it's just practice, practice, practice. The only way to get better is to keep doing it, learn everything that you can, look at others with a critical eye to see what they're doing right and how you can incorporate that same thing into your own work, and just keep steadily improving.:twilightsmile:

If you want, when I fix my computer I can help with your stories. And I know a couple people who can help. A team of like minded people works better after all.

2434882 You have a good point.

2436111 thank you. But what did you think about my comment?

2436300 Yeah that sounds really good. I need the help.

2436575 and so the dirty joke flew over lunerpets head... I will be able to help as soon as my computer is fixed. Might be done tomorrow other wise it'll be like a week. Is that okay?

2436718 Haha. I guess it did. and you can take all the time you want. I'm not a fast writer. I'm still working on what to write next.

2438283 good cause it's gonna be a week long wait. Parts won't be in till then.

2438676 Okay then. so many ideas I just don't know which one to use.

2442097 well that I can help with though personal messages would be a better place to say any ideas.

2442139 Sure talk to you there.

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