Grammar problems, and times

Hello, the many tens of people who actually read what I post, its me again, of course. lately, i've been going back, and reading through the story "The spider's game" and I've found something withing the first few lines of the first chapter of the story. It's grammar is poo. Every time I had time to write it though, when im not doing homework, or reading, or playing video games, etc, it was at midnight, to three in the morning. This is why the grammar in the story is very bad. I will be searching for times in which I can work on it though, and most likely, it will be around noon. schools is also getting back in. I will be in school from august 19th, to may 23rd. (the 24th is a half day.) We need to be able to plan times when I can write it all. im planning right after I get home from school, for a few hours, to on weekends, when my mom's out shopping, in which I can write during. my mom doesn't know im a brony and doesn't know I write fan fiction. Quite embarrassing if I say so myself. Well, thats about it for this blog. I will be writing as much as possible, because I haven't lived up to my promises. I have great idea that I can't come through with.