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Between Lines


A purveyor of intelligent literary commentary some of the time, and whatever I feel like the rest of the time.

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  • 295 weeks
    Fallout Equestria: A Star to Steer Her By

    Current word count: 239

    Current Re-write: #11

    Thought of the day: "It's good to be sticking to writing again, even if it's slow."

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  • 377 weeks
    Samurai Jack

    So. I started getting into Samurai Jack now that they're giving it a season 5.

    And I just realized something.

    Nightmare Moon's story is just Samurai Jack from the other perspective.

    4 comments · 683 views
  • 401 weeks
    Sci-fi fans: support this game!

    http://store.steampowered.com/app/476530/

    Finally, someone sat down and did space combat RIGHT. No longer will we have to argue about if "fighters are useless" or the value of the "cube squared law." Finally, we can sit down and say "this works, and this doesn't."

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  • 406 weeks
    Stuff I bought with my No Man's Sky refund: Meridian Squad 22 and Valley

    Welcome back to the second and final edition of SIBWMNMSR!

    Today, I'm going to be doing a short post, and this is for two reasons.

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  • 407 weeks
    Stuff I bought with my No Man's Sky refund: Duskers

    So! In the wake of the No Man's Sky fiasco, namely it not being half the game it was promised to be, I find myself with 60 bucks in my steam wallet needing somewhere to go. And I figure some of you might be in the same situation. SO, in the spirit of that, I give you:

    STUFF I BOUGHT WITH MY NO MAN'S SKY REFUND

    Today's episode: Duskers!

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    8 comments · 582 views
Jun
5th
2012

My first story! · 3:49am Jun 5th, 2012

Well, it seems that my first story is off to a swimming start.

Honestly, I could not physically be happier.

I hoped that the time and effort I put into Lyra Heartstrings and the Hand of Man would be rewarded, and already, my expectations have been far surpassed. To everyone who has faved and commented, or even just read and enjoyed, I thank you from the bottom of my heart.

What will I work on next? I'm not sure, honestly.

I had an idea for a sequel to LHatHoM/crossover/AU of another story published on here, but I don't have an official go ahead yet, so I won't name names in the interests of keeping pressure to a minimum.

Aside from that, I was toying with 3 other story ideas:

"An Orchestra of Liars"
Ever since her adventure in the crystal caves, Lyra Heartstrings has been putting her newfound knowledge to good use: Writing (Plagiarizing) Hard-boiled detective stories. However, when she is approached with a lucrative investigation, Lyra finds herself sucked into one of her own tales, complete with intrigue, danger, and overly cynical dialogue!

"Together, alone."
For ages past, the sister princesses of Equestria have ruled together, jointly providing for the safety and well being of their people. The ultimate authority in the land, it is upon their heads that the price of freedom rests. Recently reunited after one thousand years, they will soon discover that their bill has come due.

"The Door in the Basement."
Lyra Heartstrings is gone. The only clue: a door in her basement that leads nowhere. With the forbidden knowledge she possesses unaccounted for, it falls to her lone confidant, Twilight Sparkle, to unravel the mystery. How will she, and ultimately her friends, face the secrets that lie beyond...
...the door in the basement?

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Comments ( 6 )

My body is ready for these fics. Great job on your first story, by the way. I loved it.

I plugged the story a bit, but only because I thought it was one of the better Lyra/Human stories I've read.

I really liked the approach to the whole 'There is no/was no line' thing. It's nice to see a story divert from the, 'humans are inherently evil' ideal.

I realize that this would mean a lot more if it were coming from a more established author but...
Thanks for the good read.

-N64Fan

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No problem. I'm just happy I can provide a more nuanced outlook on these kinds of topics. Our world is a complex one, and it deserves to be recognized as such.

Well done, friend. :yay:

I have to say, all three of those ideas sound pretty dang awesome. My favorite, though, is the one with the door in the basement, it just sounds so... mysterious.

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That's the one I plan to lavish the most attention on, honestly. If one were to compare the relative "budgets" of these three pieces, I'd say that "Orchestra" was a cheesy B movie, that "Together" was a summer blockbuster, and that "The Door" Would be an oscar nominee, and probably close to my magnum opus.

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