Jun
2nd
2012
"Waiting" Has Been Extended · 9:55am Jun 2nd, 2012
Well, I cannot say I imagined such positive feedback on a piece I scribbled out in a day. Now, I really wanna shoot for Equestria Daily, so I've been working on expanding the story a bit. I've added a few more descriptions to Celestia's thoughts, as well as included a bit of actual dialogue between Luna and Celestia. It's up to about 2250 words, so I should be able to reach the 2500 word barrier with a few more looks at the piece.
Hope I made the story even better. Any thoughts and feedback are greatly appreciated!
Prologue? Anyway your fic was glorious, hit me right in the feels
, and I'm dammed sure it will get onto Equestria Daily. Seriously, it was incredibly thought provoking and to be honest kind of scary. I felt really bad for both of them.