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Garbo


A Pasty Plebeian Pencil Pusher

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  • 466 weeks
    I'm Basically Done

    I hate to say it, but I've moved on from fan fiction, and really the whole brony community as a whole. As with all things, you just get bored of it eventually, and I think that times has come for me. Who knows, maybe I'll have time for this stuff later in life, but I think it's time to say goodbye. I've been spending a lot of time working on music and stuff; my band is playing at the Burlington

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  • 470 weeks
    Private Groups

    Because we don't already have skype for that.
    (in all seriousness, cool feature, and will be good for those who don't have skype)

    0 comments · 307 views
  • 471 weeks
    A Temporary Loss In Interest, And In Time

    So I haven't been on here very much in the last two weeks. I've been keeping busy with things, schools things, and adjusting to taking more hours at my job. I'm also not feeling particularly inspired in terms of ponyfic, but I do have some ideas I want to write before I call writing quits (which will probably happen within the next year, honestly. Though I'll probably still pop in here as long as

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  • 472 weeks
    Bernie Sanders is running for President

    Now I don't have to vote for somebody I hate in my first ever year of eligibility.

    4 comments · 330 views
  • 473 weeks
    Testing Testing 1, 2, 3

    So today, after spending all day studying for my upcoming AP exam, working 8 hours at my new* job, and then doing more of the same, I decided to unwind and try and catch up on season 4, which I admittedly never finished. And what do I get when unwinding? An episode about fracking tests for Baltar's sake. It's like mlp is trying to tell me to study instead of wasting time watching cartoons. Joke's

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Jun
9th
2014

Why I haven't finished Fool In The Rain · 7:21pm Jun 9th, 2014

There are spoilers, the big ones are spoilered.

It's not that I'm lazy this time, I swear. It's because I don't know how to finish it. Originally, I had a story plan, but most of the plan went out the window when I made massive changes to the first chapter (the original version can be seen here. As you see, it's quite different). The only thing I know about how I want to end the story is that I don't want Fluttershy and Pinkie together at the end.. For more reasons that living up to the sad tag, that's just the reality of the story I've painted, where the theme is Fluttershy opening up to somepony else but also understanding the consequences of it. I'm also a stickler about having most of my stories still fit into canon, so them being together for much longer wouldn't work.

And that's my problem. I can know the general direction of the story, but I still don't know what to do with that. It's very hard to write or want to write that sort of thing. Hell, I think it's my most technically proficient writing and I hate to give it a bittersweet ending after how feel-good the second chapter was. But the whole story was bittersweet, so I suppose it makes sense. So if anyone who read it has any advice on how I could tie it all together within the proposed mold, I'd love to hear it. I've got a few ideas myself, but I find them dissatisfying. I'll tell you if you want me to, I guess. the second purpose of this blog was to help me try to think of something. Writing all this down gives me a slightly clearer picture of what I'm going to do with it, but we'll see what comes of this.

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