My first non clop story and hardly anyone likes it. big surprise there -_-

My first non clop story and hardly anyone likes it. big surprise there -_-

I wish some of the people who downvoted it would at least give me some constructive feedback. And really I feel hurt because unlike my clop stories I really put my heart into this one. It means something to me. It's not just a story but it was meant to be a fun adventure through Equestria. It's not even a self insert. The main character is a real historical figure I read about and that was what gave me the idea. I did not want to use Merlin because everyone uses Merlin. And I made the character in the form of a silly old man specifically to avoid putting myself into the story.

So in the end I wish that someone would at least say something as to why they do or do not like the story. I've really lost my motivation.