After witnessing many failures in the gauntlet that is higher education, some of which may be mine, I have carefully contemplated the writing style of At Their Service. The second person perspective is a bit limiting for me, and I've talked it over with some peeps that it's kinda "eh" and "meh" and mostly "geh", because the "you" in the story can never really be you, and that's kinda
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WHOO! LOVE THIS STORY!!!