Popularity

A single entry in the weird anthology thing I wrote in a day is already more read/liked than the story I spent 6 months writing and editing to as close to perfection as I can get. (Taking many breaks and hiatuses, though. Don't get the impression I work hard.) I guess those "mature" and "gore" tags turn quite I few people off, understandably so.

Not mad, I guess things just go that way sometimes. Can't complain about people actually reading something I wrote!

I would appreciate feedback, though. Both of my stories are kindof experiments, and I'd like to know if the intended effects work on anybody else. I mean, I know what I'm going for, but without comments I don't know if someone reading knows what I'm going for. I'd appreciate the criticism.