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Jaxxon Markus Citadel


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  • 505 weeks
    It's over?

    By now, you've probably all heard the news. Mystquestria, by Mister Citadel, has finally been put out of its misery. Due to a PC failure I wasn't able to continue my little spoof of it, but as we all stand and look at the smoldering wreckage, I can't help but feel as though this is a bittersweet victory. While this story's blatant homophobia and bigotry won't be missed, I think we can all agree

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  • 511 weeks
    Well now, he's returned has he?

    Then I guess it's time for me to dive once more into the breach.

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  • 519 weeks
    So I was thinking to myself...

    ...and thinking is a dangerous pastime, I know. But sometimes the ol' brain just starts whirring and there's nothing you can do about it.

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Jun
2nd
2014

So I was thinking to myself... · 5:34pm Jun 2nd, 2014

...and thinking is a dangerous pastime, I know. But sometimes the ol' brain just starts whirring and there's nothing you can do about it.
What was I thinking about? Well, my little parody comes to mind. I kind of wanted to know what people thought was the most repulsive parts of the original story, because mocking stuff is way easier when you know what you're shooting at. So if there's something I should know, drop a comment below!
I'll do what I can to make this story

Cheers!

Comments ( 1 )

Well, there was the obvious homophobia, but to me, the thing that pissed me off most about the original was the fact he thought it was a good idea to carry a loaded machine pistol to a crowded area.

In the current version, not only does he hint at the homophobia and portraying homosexuals as child rapists, there's also the supremacist theme where each of the tribes think they're the master race and mingling with the others is a crime against pony kind. While these kinds of people exist in real life, they're pretty much a minority if you look at the big picture whereas in his story, they're the majority.

Keep at it though, I'll be reading both stories.

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