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Defoloce


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  • 463 weeks
    [Story Excerpt] The Drop-Off

    As before, a passage from Galvanized. The tentpole moments in the story were everyman protagonist Kevin seeing how the HLF's struggle to turn away the ponies actually went down, and it was these moments I had actually drafted up to act as waypoints for the plot. Like Mad Max in the excellent recent movie Fury Road, he is less of a "main character" and more of the vessel

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  • 464 weeks
    [Story Excerpt] Deal of a Lifetime

    This is a scene from my cancelled TCB story Galvanized in which the protagonist, Kevin, meets with Oklahoma's HLF head honcho in a kind of interview/acclimatization process. I never edited, beta'd, or even second-passed the chapter this scene was in, so it stands as-is, but as a concept for a set-piece I'm proud of it (it's also where the title-drop occurs) and wanted to share

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  • 492 weeks
    On Badasses and What Makes Them Badass

    This might be an ill-advised blog entry because I'm writing through a fever and it's late, but this pony fanfiction site is the only place I visit where I can even remotely pretend that me "writing about writing" is relevant to anything people are hanging around to see. I don't even know if a treatise like this exists elsewhere on FIMfiction but whatever, I can't get to sleep and whenever I close

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    3 comments · 625 views
  • 495 weeks
    Happy Veteran's Day

    Whether you call it that, Remembrance Day, or Armistice Day, if you know someone who served, please thank them if you haven't already. Even during the best of times, duty permeates every aspect of your life. It's demanding living, hard on families and relationships, a perfect storm of boredom, obligation, trepidation, and, all too often, horror.

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  • 519 weeks
    Always Say No Featured on Royal Canterlot Library!

    A few weeks ago, I was approached asking if I would allow Always Say No to be put up on Royal Canterlot Library. I said yes, of course (I don't always say no, haw haw), and I very much enjoyed reading what RCL's staff had to say about it, which includes their own personal rationales for choosing

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May
23rd
2014

Always Say No Featured on Royal Canterlot Library! · 11:57pm May 23rd, 2014

A few weeks ago, I was approached asking if I would allow Always Say No to be put up on Royal Canterlot Library. I said yes, of course (I don't always say no, haw haw), and I very much enjoyed reading what RCL's staff had to say about it, which includes their own personal rationales for choosing it to be added.

Of particular interest to me was what Present Perfect had to say: "It’s excellent sci-fi without necessarily being excellent fanfic." In the larger context, the debate was over how "pony" the story was. Now, of course I found it thrilling that someone considers Always Say No to be excellent sci-fi, but boiled down, no, it certainly isn't a good example of fanfiction. The story isn't very pony at all; the Celestia AI is not—nor was she ever intended to come off as—the Celestia, and all of the "ponies" seen are either uploaded humans, humans playing their pony avatars, or the Celestia AI role-playing as pony NPCs. With very little massaging, the Friendship is Optimal setting could have been built up for any number of pop-culture IPs. What MLP brings to it, however, are the themes of friendship being more important than anything else, at least to an AI, and in the evocative, yet foreign way that an AI would likely interpret it.

Anyway, I want to thank anyone and everyone who considered Always Say No memorable enough to feature! What a feeling it is to know someone enjoyed something you created so much.

Comments ( 9 )
PresentPerfect
Author Interviewer

Luckily, I have always valued "is a good story" over "is pony enough" in all my dealings. :V

It was a legitimately great story, and if maybe some of it could have been equally applicable to a universe without ponies -- well, life is like that sometimes. The Greg/Celestia exchanges are so good, they demand to be read out loud to be properly appreciated.

I'm the RCL's token Optimalverse fan, but yeah, when you finished this one I knew I had to nominate it even despite FIO's distance from the MLP source. There's some amazing depth here, and it's cool seeing such a strange reflection of the show still illuminate the show's core values. I hope it brings you some well-deserved good attention. :twilightsmile:

I think it was plenty pony once Greg emigrated.

Congrats D! An excellent story AND well written AND very deserving of inclusion in TCL. :twilightsmile:

Congratulations!

Congrats, dude: your story certainly deserves it.

And then there was not only the original FiO on the PFV but now also a Recursive Fanfiction based on it on the RCL! About time we got this little exclusive club of ours some well deserved attention!

Congratulations to you Defoloce, you deserve this.

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