Preview · 12:44am May 15th, 2014

Hello, peeps! So, the story that won was "Feed", and I will be working on that one. Since I haven't been uploading any content for a while, I thought I might give you guys a treat—a preview of the story.

Without further ado, we have "Feed", the story of Twilight Sparkle, who fell in love with a changeling. Also adding a dark twist.

Fear. That is what Mimic first felt when he saw Twilight Sparkle. She was just standing there for a minute, looking at him, and Mimic, in return, looked back. Finally, the silence was interrupted by the buzzing of Mimic’s wings and a swift takeoff into the air.

“Wait!” the pony princess called to him, and he could hear the flap of feathers. “Come back!”

Mimic chuckled to himself. As if. The law was simple: ever since the changeling invasion on Canterlot, everypony that ever saw a changeling was advised to either trap it and turn it in to a princess or kill it on contact. And Mimic was not about to risk a meeting with death by the freakin princess of Equestria.

“I won’t hurt you!” she called. Boy, she wouldn’t give up, would she? Mimic continued to fly until he heard panting behind him, obviously from a tuckered out Twilight Sparkle. “Please!”

The changeling ignored her. He had duties to attend to, and if he didn’t do them in time, the Queen might do worse than the punishments the Equestrian ponies would give. Suddenly, something purple wrapped around him, keeping him in place. The shallow breathing of the pony next to him confirmed Mimic’s suspicions: this was magic, more specifically, Twilight Sparkle’s purple aura.

Mimic knew from experience with the Queen that nothing he did would make it any easier for him to get out of this trap. Instead, he flipped around, only to see the flying Twilight Sparkle next to him, horn ablaze. “I’m sorry,” she started, panting in between, “that I had to do this to you. But you have to trust me when I tell you that no matter what, I won’t hurt you.”

Sure. Mimic looked at her almost to say, Are you kidding me, lady? Mimic was not about to trust some hanky-panky pony princess about Equestrian law that would be obeyed.

“I just wanted to warn you,” she continued, “that you are going into a dangerous zone for changelings.” She panted, then said, “So sorry about this. Still haven’t gotten used to the whole ‘flying’ thing.”

Mimic didn’t respond, or show any sign of acknowledgement, but Twilight still was talking. “As I was saying, this is Canterlot—the place your queen tried to take over. Which means this city will have no tolerance of you and will kill you on sight.”

Suddenly the changeling was released from Twilight’s aura and his wings began to buzz again, causing him to hover in the air.

“It’s up to you whether you’ll go that way into Canterlot, or come with me to Ponyville, where it’s safe. You can trust me, I swear I don’t want to hurt you.”

Mimic was skeptical, to say the least. A pony princess offering to bring him home with her? Who does that? Mimic almost had to remind himself that she was new, only been a princess for a couple of months. But still, it was so tempting…

The changeling looked towards the direction of the city of Canterlot. His queen had assigned him with the task of bringing back some love spells from the Canterlot Archives, so they could sustain themselves for a bit before planning their next attack. She would certainly get mad at him if he came back with nothing.

Then again… Didn’t Twilight Sparkle live in a library? Some of the changelings back at the Hive that had gone recon a while back had told him about it. If she was the princess, wouldn’t she have access to spellbooks?

Before he could change his mind, Mimic swooshed around and gave a curt nod to Twilight, who smiled in return.

Still needs proofreading, revising, and editing of course... But this is the rough draft for the first chapter of "Feed", called "When Life Gives You Lemons". I hoped you enjoyed the preview, and if you are willing to help me with the story, then just PM me. It'll be easier for me to keep track. If you like the premise so far, leave a comment!

That's all for now!

~Weeping Angel

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forevertheDoctor #1 · May 15th, 2014 · · ·

To PM I goooo

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