Editing/Rewriting Chapter by Chapter · 8:26pm May 14th, 2014
Basically what the title says. Looking back on most if not all of the chapters, I feel like they were written by a different, more novice person. I'm not claiming that I'm Waaaaaay better now. But I feel like I've definitely improved. I'll let you guys know if there are any major changes to anything that you need to take a look at.
In Sacrifice I removed the replaced the scene in the orchard with the mysterious voice and dark clouds. Instead of confronting his father, Mac just yells at a random voice, no big deal.
(More will go here as I look through each chapter.)
Renamed Sympathy, now it's Understanding. Also changing our description of when Thunderlane goes to see Twilight. I decided that I can keep the story canon by changing a few very minor things. Plus, Season 5 won't come out for almost a year, long enough for me to play around a bit. Plus, it would've sucked to not be able to refer to Discord's new appreciation for friendship. I mean I could have done it anyway, but now it's canon.
Good luck with that!
Nice chapter. I can't wait for the next one.