Gonna Address The Thestral in The Room · 9:13pm May 9th, 2014
Alright, I know a lot of you are asking for details about what's going to happen with Luna and the thestrals and are even asking for either a whole chapter or story dedicated to it. Well, I've already got something in mind, so bear with me here.
As you already know, Midnight is going to be at the gala. However, since she has no expectations and is very unlikely to start chumming up with the nobility (I doubt either party will want to), what exactly is she going to do? Meeting with a certain princess and discussing a certain recent event comes to mind.
All I ask is that you guys let me get to this and do my best to meet your expectations that way. IF I fail to deliver that way, THEN I will consider a short side story detailing the events.
I really want keep this momentum going and get season one done one time, so please just give me this?
Also, the whole point of that argument between Star Bucks and Doughnut Joe was suppose to be a gag as well as show Luna getting her hopes dashed for the night. I'm sorry that I didn't look up monopolies in detail.
It's your story man do whatever you want to do I'm sure I'll like it can't say much for everyone else.
What do you mean not looking up monopolies in detail?
I thought the whole thing was quite acurate, if not then I should clearly be sueing my teachers back at college......
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The back and forth between RealityCheck and BronzeStatue are making me second guess myself.
That sounds really interesting. Don't get me wrong, I'd LOVE to see Midnight mouthing off to all the nobles, but as funny as that would be I'd rather have some good ol' plot-building/revealing talks. With Luna. I kinda lost my train of thought but oh well! I like what you're doing, and I'm glad you're continuing. Cheers! :D
Now will the side story be included into 'The Witching Hour' or separate all together?
Also, Midnight meets Blueblood at the Gala. This I wish to see.
Hey bro your shit is good anyway you shovel it man.
2093192 As far as I can tell, you got the idea of predatory practices and horizontal integration pretty well, so bravo for a throwaway gag.
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It'll be like 2 Bits and be a companion story.
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thank you. I guess when I first started on here and found him, I kinda put him up on a pedestal because I felt he was such a great author (I have seriously faved all his stories). So when he says "I think you got this wrong" I read it as "This is wrong. Fix it."
Stupid on my part, but I just couldn't help it at first.
2094526 I see what you're saying.