May
8th
2014
"Beneath, You're Beautiful" Story Idea · 2:01am May 8th, 2014
This takes place between chapters 4 and 5 of "The Not-So-Normal Adventures of King Sombra and Pinkie Pie".
Beneath, You're Beautiful
After Pinkie's mental breakdown and Sombra's consoling, Sombra is still surprised to hear Pinkie doubting her self worth. Despite his many protests and compliments towards the broken mare, he finds that the sweetest words hold no meaning without the actions to back them.
So Sombra does the only thing he can to prove how beautiful he knows she is.
Maaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay contain adult content... Which is why I don't want to pursue this idea as of yet...
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Harmony Charmer · 319 views
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An interesting turn of events, but I approve! I really love to see something like this.
Adult content... You mean clop? Sorry, but I shun clop.
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Which is one of the reasons I don't want to go in that direction... I am iffy on the subject. I don't hate people who do it, but I don't partake in it...
2087581 mabye you can give it a teen-sex rating and say they banged. That is the closest I would do to clop.
2087581 I haven't written it before...
Sounds good, although I particularly don't like clop, but as an editor, I'd like to point out one small thing: the title should be:
"Beneath, You're Beautiful" or something to that. Just a grammar error, sorry if I bothered you.
Is that supposed to be "you're"?
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But seriously, I was just about to post that.
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GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH... I'll fix it... Curse you, Sleepy Brain!!!
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and the second one
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The second what? I'm stupid, so you have to clarify.
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Muh groodness, it fxed itslf. Liek MAGK
Well it's not like you need to write clop. Just be as suggestive as you usually are about the subject.