Fragile Wings · 3:18am May 26th, 2012
Oh...My....God. My Proofreader Fragile Wings is the best, I look back at my old version of Broken Colt part 1 and 2 to see my writing, not to see much emotion in my thoughts. Yet, I look at my friend's Fragile Wing's edits seeing more emotion kicking in almost causing me to tear up, I now thought that I probably couldn't edit any better than Fragile. Not only causing me to see more emotion but also giving me the more visualization I need to completely picture the setting and the conflict at the time, My originals are good but Fragile made them better with more emotion, visualization, and cut down on how frequently the ponies speak. I cant wait to see the future of my stories if Fragile Wings is still on my side, I think we make a pretty good team, I write then she edits, <3 all the edits you've done for me! Big BIG Shoutout to Fragile Wings hoping she will come up with a story of her own one day!
FRAGILE WINGS! YOU DA BOSS!
