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Princess


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  • 623 weeks
    Character templates

    In future blogging (if you're watching me, that is!) I will be putting down character templates if I ever take up the quill and scroll anymore. Right now I'm trying to act like people actually notice I exist, so bare with me.

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  • 649 weeks
    Applegrove has taken a new turn

    If you hadn't seen it yet, this might turn out to be pretty bad as of yet. I didn't intend for it to take this turn, but my imagination seems to get away from me. I applied the appropriate tags accordingly, although sad isn't the best way to describe it, this is the overall feeling of the forest Applejack is in. It is also dark, and isn't for the occasional viewer that wanders their eyes over it,

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  • 649 weeks
    No update today (sorry)

    Had a rough night, and I wouldn't want to disappoint my readers with less than Grade A material. I'll take a break today, but I'll definitely being doing a chapter tomorrow as if my life depends on it. Hope this isn't too much of a convience.

    Checking out.

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  • 649 weeks
    Time for another chapter

    My pitiful story that only two have responded to kindly I guess I should dedicate myself to finishing another piece since somepony took interest in it. I am glad that someone has, for it used to be my friends and my friends that did read it were not entirely helpful. For instance, my friends don't think my intelligence is higher than a rock, so it's all good.

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  • 650 weeks
    Approval

    All of my fanfictions are to strengthen my writing capability. They might not be as good as I want, since I always love to add more detail, but I do it when I have random imagination spurts and I want to write it down. I like any criticism that helps me with my work, and would appreciate instead of just reading it, you make a comment about a mistake if you see one and stuff like that. I'm not

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May
25th
2012

Character templates · 11:48pm May 25th, 2012

In future blogging (if you're watching me, that is!) I will be putting down character templates if I ever take up the quill and scroll anymore. Right now I'm trying to act like people actually notice I exist, so bare with me.

So far I have made a mesh and random mess of ponies because I had no idea how to act them out, and being a long time role player, I have noticed I do better monologue than dialogue. I can become increasingly in-depth with how a pony can think, take things, etc., but not how they act. Acting is usually how a story progresses, and this is my week-point! So I think it's better to try a couple new strategies (oh Celestia why am I writing all of this)

Diary/Journal - Single person, thoughts can be expressed evenly and I can get around to using skipping points instead of explaining everything, since this would be a "Found thing" that someone, somepony, or something reads.

Closed Perspective(?) - My way of saying one character says all the shots, and it's from their eyes. I don't know the actual term for it, too lazy to look it up.

I should however work on my weak points. Friendly bits of encouragement would be nice, since I feel like Fluttershy most of the time and one could say that I work better when it's for myself (in my head) than when I put my pen onto the paper, so to speak. I wish to make more in the future, since I enjoy writing pony stories, but I'm beginning to wander if I'm cut out for it. It's difficult to write for the stories so much I ran Applegrove into the ground because I didn't know how to do fight scenes at all. I'm used to the occasional adventurous RP, and so forth my story has suffered.

I hope I can make a top notch story in the future.

Yours Truly,

Nurse Woona.

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