Story idea, need feedback

okay story idea based on the new (very spoilery) trailer for the Equestria Games episode, I'd like feedback, please: Rainbow Dash and Spitfire are very close friends, but when Spitfire very narrowly but noticeably beats her best friend in the Equestria Games relay race, the two very competitive mares have a falling out. Can Soarin help them fix their fractured friendship, before it's completely destroyed beyond repair?

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[Comrade Bagel Muffin]

Sounds like it could be an enjoyable read.