Ditzy Falls: Suggestions?

I've been writing on this site for about a year now (a year and a half, maybe? It's all a bit of a blur ), and while I've learned many things, one thing I've learned is this: Some of you guys have better ideas than I do. Like, way better ideas. Hell, I'm sure most of you have better ideas.

Usually, I hear these ideas way too late for me to actually do anything with them, which is more than a bit of a shame, like a joke I should've done or how a story should've ended, usually in ways that are brilliant and I never would have thought of. So, in the interest of learning from missed opportunities, I wanna hear from you guys. I wanna hear what you think should happen, or what is going to happen, or even just something you'd like to see, be it a scene, a joke, a piece of character development, or even a general story direction.

I already have a general plan on where the story should go from here, but it's pretty flexible at this point. If you throw me something good that I wouldn't have thought of, there's a good chance that it'll make it into the story. Even if not, I might get some more inspiration from one of your ideas. If either happens, you'll get credit for it at the end of the chapter where it shows up. If your idea doesn't make it, please don't be offended.

So, if you have something to say, give me your best shot.

Comments

[devas]

Rainbow Dash tries to set up Fluttershy with Ditzy; after a romantic comedic episode, Fluttershy blurts out a confession, after which Dash brutally rejects Fluttershy, who tries to go on a rebound with Ditzy. However she, disgusted by 'Shy's opportunistic actions, rejects her too, and she remains alone and unloved.

Alternatively;

Ditzy runs into Dash and Fluttershy together; Dash starts teasing her in what she thinks is a funny way but which is actually extremely offensive (and funny. Just because something is horrible doesn't detract from its other qualities); Fluttershy rallies to Ditzy's defense, and after a verbal smackdown they get to know each other better.

Alternatively;

Fluttershy runs into financial troubles because...well, she doesn't actually have a job, and she has to care for what is a small zoo. Ditzy, meanwhile, wins the lottery. Cue Fluttershy trying to mooch off of Ditzy, with Ditzy growing more and more disillusioned and Fluttershy feeling more and more guilty.

Alternatively;

Ditzy runs into Discord. He thinks having those two together is a capital idea.

Alternatively;

Ditzy lets go of her infatuation, and starts going out with Fleur De Lys, and gossips with Fluttershy about how her dates go. Fluttershy starts feeling irrationally jealous.

Ok, these are pretty much all the ideas I came with on the spot, dunno whether you'll think any one of them is good

[Midnight herald]

Ideas I came up with:
-Fluttershy is still in complete and total doubt about how she handled the situation with Ditzy. She has another conversation with Pinkie, who more-or-less tells her she should decide whether or not her maybe-crush on Rainbow is more important than the possibility of a new start with a lovely little mare who's obviously into her. Then Flutters either confesses and is rejected by Rainbow Dash, or decides to give Ditzy an honest try, depending on what all her little neurotic brain desires. If she's rejected by Rainbow, she could do a desperate attempt on Ditzy and have to step back and slow down after she's given a taste of her own medicine?

-Ditzy tries to have an adult conversation with Fluttershy, about how she's lonely and desperate, and how she's sorry that she came on too strong, could they be friends, etc... And Fluttershy admits she's holding a torch for Rainbow and asks for advice? And then Ditzy tries really, really hard to be a supportive friend and actually accidentally shows off how selfless and silly and sexy she is, and Flutters falls for her in turn?

- Fluttershy accidentally gets in good with Ditzy's kids, spends time at the house, and almost has drunken-mistake-times with Ditzy before running off in a panic and trying to avoid Ditzy, who dutifully comes by to see how Fluttershy is doing after the fact and eventually, inevitably, becomes a staple to Fluttershy's routine, and from there, the kissing happens?

Enjoy!