Chapter 4 and Stuff · 5:26pm Apr 18th, 2014
As I mentioned in the Author's Notes, this chapter is the start of a turning point in the story. These first 4 chapters were mostly character and world set up, getting all the pieces in place so that you all, the readers, have an understanding of the way the world works. Of course, there is still a lot left for Twilight to figure out, but that will come in time. The next chapter will start pushing into the "main plot" of the story.
In the previous version of this story I tried to write, the main story started right away in Chapter 2, and it felt rushed. There wasn't the proper foundation to the world that I wanted. So I've slowed everything down, put a better pace on the story, and I think it's working out much better.
Anyways, big plans coming. That romance tag isn't a mistake after all!
-- Soft Story