• Member Since 31st Jan, 2012
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Derparoo


I'm new to this whole "writing" deal, so once I get some work posted, critique is very much encouraged!

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  • 623 weeks
    Busybusybusybusybusy

    Alright, so first of all, I want to extend a huge thanks to everyone, those of you who leave comments, who rate, who read and enjoy, or don't enjoy, and especially those of you who've followed and supported this idea since its inception.

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  • 629 weeks
    [no title]

    Hey everybody.
    I said I'd be working harder, and darnit that's what I'm doing! I'm actually working on the next chapter right now, but it may be a while till it's up.
    Firstly, I sort of fell behind in classwork whilst I was writing, hehe, so I've got a few papers to write this week, and next week I'm taking a trip to Ottawa.

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  • 634 weeks
    Brief Update

    Hey all, just wanted to let you know that I am still hard at work with my story. This chapter's been a little bit harder to write, plus a bunch of school papers getting in the way. -.- Hopefully I'll be able to get it up in a week or two, sorry for the wait. I started writing out chapters by hand more than once, and I'm on like, the 5th draft of this part, I'm never quite happy with it as a

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  • 636 weeks
    5 is up!

    Here's a part five for all you nice people. :)

    It's a very Al heavy chapter, with a little Edward sequence.


    Plus, special guest appearance by the one, the only, FANCYPANTS!

    Enjoy <3

    Love,

    Derp

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  • 637 weeks
    Hearts and Hooves Day

    Hey everypony. I'm going to be taking a small break from my current story for a little bit. Nothing too big, a new piece should be ready for posting in a week or so. :)

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May
23rd
2012

Busybusybusybusybusy · 2:27am May 23rd, 2012

Alright, so first of all, I want to extend a huge thanks to everyone, those of you who leave comments, who rate, who read and enjoy, or don't enjoy, and especially those of you who've followed and supported this idea since its inception.
Honestly, I've thought about giving up on the story as a whole, but you guys have given me the drive to press on, both for the enjoyment of writing and the challenge of honing my skills.
Sadly, it's been a long, LONG time since I've added to the story. I know, I'm terrible, but I have had an incredibly hectic several weeks. I've been trying to cope with exams, friends leaving, losing a family member, and now I've got to gear up and move half way across Canada.
Unfortunately, I don't see much time to work on this crazy FMA/MLP crossover any time in the near future, so I'm setting the story to being on hiatus.
I promise you all, I WILL get back on this crazy train, and to those of you who'll stand by me and wait, thank you, from the bottom of my heart.
I'll post updates on progress soon.
All the best,
~Derp <3

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Comments ( 17 )

Take your time my friend, you deserve it, we will wait :pinkiesmile:

If ya need more time, i'll just wait till yer up ta it, your an amazing writer don't ever stop

You have done an awesome job with this story, im willing to wait and see what happens next.:twilightsmile:

your life is more important....take care of it first and then come back:twilightsmile:

130698 It's funny, actually. It's been...about two or so years since he even got on FimFiction.

Well, someone is definitely dead. I don't even see why people praise him as this "amazing writer". Personally, I think he pulled a lot of cliches and the dialog felt clunky to me.

2657815
The account which you replied to is no longer in use. This is my new one.

2657963 Have you tried even asking a local moderator for help? It's been two years. You made one story that got popular not due to the execution, but the concept in itself. Not to bring attention to the fact that the execution was very novice and unsteady at best.

Had you truly cared about reclaiming this account, you'd have it by now.

2658964 you originally replied to FlyingEagle93...an account with no stories

I said the account which you REPLIED to, i didn't say anything about this blog post.

Ergo....I'm not the author and never was.

2659504 Well, Alex. It's been a year and you still haven't even garnered a meek following, nor have you advanced into writing something worthwhile. It also would appear that you possess an affinity for Pokemon stories. I advise you make a more cultural name and attempt to make a more mature stake here.

2659931 I don't really care much about followers because I don't need followers. Also, I'm a reader...not a writer (I've tried writing, I didn't like what I had, so i've decided to let my mind brew one, which I currently am doing.)

2660084 I can easily predict it's something not too original. A crossover likely.

2660207
Something like that, but I didn't like what I wrote down.....it felt.....rushed.....inconsistent....so I decided to let my mind do the work and make ideas, it's coming together nicely in my opinion...with a few things I'd like change (it's not an MLP fic btw)

2660255 It's not MLP? Are you posting it here, or somewhere else?

2660259 Somewhere else, but it's still coming together, I want to get the general story idea down before I fully commit.

Basic stuff like genre, what happens when, etc... I'm letting my mind take care of that.

2660278 Your mind isn't some separate being capable of entirely independent thought. The most critical part of your body is your brain. Do you know why? Because it IS you. Every thought, every motion, everything you do. Your brain is what is causing that to happen.

2660286 I know that, when I mean by letting my mind take care of it, I'm actually envisioning the chapter happening in some way. With this envisioning I can make some ideas as how to use this or not, and I am currently doing this. I am using my mind to make the ideas and applying those ideas when necessary...that's what I meant, but I myself have IRL issues such as a working and college, so I use the time I get during my breaks (during work) and make some ideas and put them down in my notepad app and I take college online, so yes I can get the ideas flowing, but only a few get through.

2660286
But I also could be over-thinking things

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