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ArtichokeLust


Wow. Visiting this site again was like going back to my old neopets page. So much nostalgia.

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  • 390 weeks
    Where art thou, oh Artichoke?

    Sorry, I'm a bit busy. I had two hobbies before I got a job. Writing here, and developing AI. I hit a wall here with the new changeling episode, but in my AI development, I found a highway.

    Look at my AI! My AI is amazing!


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  • 400 weeks
    The New Hive Super Edit

    Just letting you guys know I nearly redid the entire last chapter because of a few complaints I got. (In case re-publishing didn't work.) They were definitely valid, even if I didn't agree 100% with the reasoning behind them, and now I think my story's much better because of the changes I made.

    Keep up the constructive criticism!

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  • 403 weeks
    Testing testers

    Hello guys. Here's part of what I've been doing while I've been rewriting my main story:

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  • 408 weeks
    Would you like a collab?

    I've actually been thinking of adding some collaboration into 'The New Hive' since its inception. I can't really create a realistic representation of humanity all by myself after all.

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  • 409 weeks
    Waiting for editors to compile...

    So, my next chapter's done. Just need to wait for editors to do their thing. And from what I can see from the first editor, I made quite a few mistakes.

    Well, now I have guilt-free free time... What should I do... Hmm...

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Apr
14th
2014

Very approximate time until next story: >=3 weeks. Anyone want to be an editor/pre-reader? · 4:42am Apr 14th, 2014

Hey guys,

I probably won't be writing anything for three weeks, since I plan on winning all my school finals. (I will get the highest grade! "It's not enough that I succeed, everyone else must fail" --Genghis Khan) And helping at a few clubs, and work. And learning how to write patents.

Honestly, learning how to write patents properly might take more than three weeks.



However, once I get both a story idea/inspiration and enough time, I think I'll send a blog post with a description of the story. Then, whoever comments or--if they prefer--sends me a message can help me. (Though, if you don't have proper grammar in your comment, I'm not going to let you help me with my grammar.)

Love,
Lust

P.S. I didn't proofread this. Can you find any grammatical or stylistic errors?

Edit: You can also help edit any current story of mine except Maud's River.

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Can find any grammatical or stylistic errors?

Can anyone find any grammatical or stylistic errors?:twilightsheepish:

Good luck on those finals.:twilightsmile:

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One point to Rootbeer Dew for finding a missing word!

And that error is now fixed. Now new people can find new errors.

(Also, thanks.)

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