Editing!

There will be some editing done to the first chapter and a second chapter up by the time I go to bed tonight.

To be honest, the reasons why I didn't have Twilight lifting the stranded Pinkie were twofold. Partially... I totally just forgot about her teleportation powers. I figured a pony would be hard to lift and she wouldn't want to risk that. However, as the pre-readers pointed out to me on EqD... I don't communicate that at all.

So, the change will be minor, and it's just the timing of a note from the Princess.

Hope you guys like chapter two! ^^

P.S. Anyone out there willing to be a pre-reader for me? In exhange for reciprocating the favor for you, of course, if you so wish!

Comments

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Just re-read your first chapter, I think explaining why Twilight couldn't use her magic via a note from Celestia was a good idea.

I haven't pre-read before, but I'm definitely open to giving it a try if you would allow it.