One- Short What-If (CHEATING FLUTTERSHY!) · 7:12pm Apr 12th, 2014
Huh…damn.
Guess I’m up for doing the Mane Six now.
In any case, here’s a nice little What-If to ‘One’. The what-if being…
What if Michael, in the midst of trying to close the ache in his heart, had a marefriend before he found his bondmate? What if his marefriend had cheated on him with Big Macintosh?
What if she left Big Mac out of guilt, realizing just how much she wanted Michael back, and decided to try and do so.
What if she was Fluttershy?
Well, Fleur doesn't take too kindly to somepony trying to 'steal' her beloved bondmate...
T'will only be a short thing, maybe between 1500-3000 words. It will start with Fleur telling the readers about her bondmate's Ex Marefriend, before jumping to the point where Fleur basically told her to fuck off.
In her own, clever little way XD
Consider it the 'Not quite a sequel, but all you're going to get for now' sequel.
dude a cheating fluttershy?
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It's always the quite types...
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it always is.
sounds amusing fluer don't fuck around best back off her man
How about you finish the other 5 stories first and not gives one shots. One was very boring your fist bad story. Is that why you name it one
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How about no.
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Sounds like fun, can't wait to see Fleur defending her Bondmate.
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Boring?
Hmm, maybe to you. I found it lovely and poetic
I knew you wouldn't be able to resist doing the Mane 6 after Fleur! Here is my response to this revelation of you going truly outside your comfort zone:
It is interesting, but hard to wrap my mind around the concept. It would be hard to believe that Fluttershy out of all ponies would cheat on anypony(but I guess I can say the same thing with the other five.) If you do do this story, I hope you go into detail about what led up with Fluttershy to cheat on Big Mac with Michael out all ponies.(could Fluttershy have a beastility fetish since she's a animal caretaker?) And I would like to know how Big Mac responded to the news of Fluttershy's betrayal and if he did anything to Michael?
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She cheated on Michael because, although she is kind, she is not that patient.
Michael, for reasons he knew not, couldn't bring himself to give more than a semi intense kiss. He tried to feel passionate, honestly he did.
And even with the pull, he was starting to make some sort of progress. But Flutters fucked herself over by sleeping with Big Mac after getting wrecked with her friends.
Michael found out the day after, broke up with her, and moved back into the Canterlot Hotel. (He got snuggles from Celly and Lulu, lots of them
)
In any case, Flutters hears about Michael's marefriend and, with after some self assertive motivational pep talks, tries to find him.
Unfortunately for her, he's in the shower and so Fleur opens the door. The whole conversation is just between them, with Fleur basically taking Flutter's apart when miss kindness tries to 'suggest' that Michael would be better off with her.
I'll try to keep her in character as best I can, so no mind rape from Fluttershy.
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Oh I see, I misunderstood. I thought that Fluttershy was in a relationship with Big Mac and then she cheated on Big Mac with Michael not the other way around. For some reason that sounds more believable than what I was thinking.
still waiting for your reply to my message inquiring about the status of a 'come back to me' sequel
Sounds interesting
Seeing Flutters portrayed in this manner will be a nice breath of fresh air, so long as you don't make her too OOC. Then again, you do OOC so well that it's still entertaining regardless.
While the recent works haven't really attracted me all to much like I think they should have, the Fleur-de-Lis stories are something I could get into. There's simply not enough of her in this fandom
Yay romantic drama! I'm in!
I wouldn't really consider this writing about one of the Mane Six. It is about the same as what you did with Twilight in Never Judge. No, until you write a romance with one of them as the main love interest it won't count.
Oh the scandal!
Well I was hoping for a sequel, but a "this is the closest you'll get"-quel is nice enough I guess!
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